July 9, 2022
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This morning, I rode an e-bike to Delta Park to hike.
The delta park is inside Fuyang city, and it is in the delta of Quan and Ying river.
It's like a small island because it's surrounded by water. To its east there is the Ying River and its north is the Quan river. To its west, there is also a water channel connecting the Ying and Quan rivers.
This park is divided into South Park and North Park by the eastern Yinghe Road, but these two parts are connected by a tunnel.
There is a circular footpath in this park crossing the south and north parks with a total trip of 2.45 kilometers.
Inside this park, there are trees, bushes, flowers, hills, pools, squares and various exercise equipment.
People hike, run, dance, swim, as well as play Tai Chi, yoga and so on in the mornings.
I like the trees most because they are very tall and lush, so the roads are all under their shadows.
This morning, I hiked there for about one hour. I got sweaty but I felt happy and refreshed.
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This morning, I rode an e-bike to Delta Park to hike.
The dDelta pPark is inside Fuyang city, and it is in the delta ofbetween the Quan and Ying rivers.
It's like a small island because it's surrounded by water.
To itsthe east there is the Ying River and itsto the north is the Quan rRiver.
To itsthe west, there is also a water channel connecting the Ying and Quan rivers.
This park is divided into South Park and North Park by the eastern Yinghe Roadby the eastern Yinghe Road into North Park and South Park, but these two parts are connected by a tunnel.
It sounds more natural to use the cardinal directions in this order- north, south, east, west. In this case, north goes before south.
There is a circular footpath in this park crossing the souNorth and norSouth parks with a total triplength of 2.45 kilometers.
Are "North Park" and "South Park" the name of these parks? If so, they should be capitalized.
Inside this park, there are trees, bushes, flowers, hills, pools, squares, and various exercise equipment.
What do you mean by "squares?" Maybe "plazas?"
People hike, run, dance, swim, as well as play Tai Chi, yoga and so on, etc. in the mornings.
I like the trees most because they are very tall and lush, so the roads are all underin their shadowse.
This morning, I hiked there for about one hour.
I got sweaty, but I felt happy and refreshed.
If a sentence is made up of 2 parts that could be independent sentences, then it needs a comma before the conjunction.
July 9, 2022
Thank you very much.
This morning, I rode an e-bike to Delta Park to go hiking.
Delta park is in Fuyang city, and it is between the Quan and Ying rivers.
It's like a small island because it's surrounded by water. To the east is the Ying River, and to the north is the Quan River. To the west, there is also a water channel connecting the Ying and Quan rivers.
This park is divided by the eastern Yinghe Road into North Park and South Park, but these two parts are connected by a tunnel.
There is a circular footpath in this park crossing the North and South parks with a total length of 2.45 kilometers.
Inside this park, there are trees, bushes, flowers, hills, pools, plazas, and various exercise equipment.
People hike, run, dance and swim, as well as play Tai Chi, yoga, etc. In the mornings.
I like the trees most because they are very tall and lush, so the roads are all in the shade.
This morning, I hiked there for about one hour. I got sweaty, but I felt happy and refreshed.
July 9, 2022
Inside this park, there are trees, bushes, flowers, hills, pools, squares, and various exercise equipment.
I thought that the square and plaza were the same thing. I don’t know the difference between them even now.
July 9, 2022
I thought that the square and plaza were the same thing. I don’t know the difference between them even now.
Yeah they are similar, but I've generally heard squares with something before it, ex. town square, market square. Not sure if those fit for your sentence.
July 10, 2022
Yeah they are similar, but I've generally heard squares with something before it, ex. town square, market square. Not sure if those fit for your sentence.
Okay, I see. Thank you very much.
This morning, I rode an e-bike to Delta Park to hikego hiking.
The delta park is inside Fuyang city, and it is in the delta of the Quan and Ying rivers.
It's like a small island because it's surrounded by water.
To its east there is the Ying River, and to its north is the Quan river.
To its west, there is also a water channel connecting the Ying and Quan rivers.
This park is divided into South Park and North Park by the eastern Yinghe Road, but these two parts are connected by a tunnel.
There is a circular footpath in this park crossing the south and north parks with a total trip of 2.45 kilometers in length.
Inside this park, there are trees, bushes, flowers, hills, pools, squares and various exercise equipment.
People hike, run, dance, and swim, as well as play Tai Chi, yoga and so on in the mornings.
I like the trees most because they are very tall and lush, so the roads are all under their shadows.
This morning, I hiked there for about one hour.
I got sweaty but I felt happy and refreshed.
July 9, 2022
Thank you very much.
This morning, I rode an e-bike to Delta Park to go hiking.
The delta park is inside Fuyang city, and it is in the delta of the Quan and Ying rivers.
It's like a small island because it's surrounded by water. To its east there is the Ying River, and to its north is the Quan river. To its west, there is also a water channel connecting the Ying and Quan rivers.
This park is divided into South Park and North Park by the eastern Yinghe Road, but these two parts are connected by a tunnel.
There is a circular footpath in this park crossing the south and north parks with a total of 2.45 kilometers in length.
Inside this park, there are trees, bushes, flowers, hills, pools, squares and various exercise equipment.
People hike, run, dance and swim, as well as Tai Chi, yoga and so on in the mornings.
I like the trees most because they are very tall and lush, so the roads are all under their shadows.
This morning, I hiked there for about one hour. I got sweaty but I felt happy and refreshed.
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The delta park is inside Fuyang city, and it is in the delta of Quan and Ying river. The delta park is inside Fuyang city, and it is in the delta of the Quan and Ying rivers.
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There is a circular footpath in this park crossing the south and north parks with a total trip of 2.45 kilometers. There is a circular footpath in this park crossing the south and north parks with a total There is a circular footpath in this park crossing the Are "North Park" and "South Park" the name of these parks? If so, they should be capitalized. |
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