July 8, 2022
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I like the blue sky and clouds. I like to take some pictures when I see them.
The most beautiful blue skies and clouds here often happen in autumn or the time before autumn.
Today, on my way home from Linquan County, I found the blue skies and clouds very beautiful. I took some pictures.
Now, it's early July, one month before autumn. I think that is the reason why this beautiful scenery happens.
I took this picture against the sun, using an Apple iPhone.
The most beautiful blue skies and clouds here often happcan be seen in autumn or the time before autumn.
I wouldn't say your version is incorrect but it sounded a bit unnatural to me because skies don't "happen".
Now, it's early July, one month before autumn.
I think that is the reason whyof this beautiful scenery happens.
Again, it sounded a bit unnatural.
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Good job! Your picture is also pretty :)
July 8, 2022
Thank you very much.
I like the blue sky and clouds. I like to take some pictures when I see them.
The most beautiful blue skies and clouds here often can be seen in autumn or the time before autumn.
Today, on my way home from Linquan County, I found the blue skies and clouds very beautiful. I took some pictures.
Now, it's early July, one month before autumn. I think that is the reason of this beautiful scenery.
I took this picture against the sun using an Apple iPhone.
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I like the blue sky and clouds. |
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I like to take some pictures when I see them. |
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The most beautiful blue skies and clouds here often happen in autumn or the time before autumn. The most beautiful blue skies and clouds here often I wouldn't say your version is incorrect but it sounded a bit unnatural to me because skies don't "happen". |
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Today, on my way home from Linquan County, I found the blue skies and clouds very beautiful. |
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I took some pictures. |
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Now, it's early July, one month before autumn. Now |
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I think that is the reason why this beautiful scenery happens. I think that is the reason Again, it sounded a bit unnatural. |
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I took this picture against the sun, using an Apple iPhone. |
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