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Jack

June 27, 2022

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It's been a long time since I have seen Chinese writing and I worry so much about it.

If I can see many Chinese writings here, I will be very happy because I can have the chance to help them, and that means that Chinese is popular.

Less people learning Chinese is not a good sign. I think that means that China is not welcome.

I hope that China should get along well with other countries. This way, Chinese learners will become more and more.

I don't think China has behaved well, so it seems like many countries don't like China. I feel sad about it.

If I were the president of China, I would make a big reform to China, including the social system and the diplomatic policy to make China a welcomed country.

All Chinese learners, please write more. I am always here waiting to correct your journals. Thank you very much.

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It's been a long time since I have seen Chinese writing on this website and I worry so much about it.

If I can see many Chinese writings here, I will be very happy because I can have the chance to help them, and that means that Chinese is a popular language.

I think thatThat could means that China is not welcome.

I hope that China shouldwill get along well with other countries.

This way, Chinese learners will become more and morincrease.

I feel sad about ithat.

If I were the president of China, I would makcreate a big reform toin China, including the social system and the diplomatic policy to make China a welcomed country.

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Wonderful writing!

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Jack

June 29, 2022

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It's been a long time since I have seen Chinese writing here and I worry so much about it.

It wasn't clear just from this sentence that you mean Chinese writing on langcorrect.

If I can see many Chinese writings here, I will be very happy because I can have the chance to help them, and that means that Chinese is popular.

Less people learning Chinese is not a good sign.

I think that means that China is not welcome.

I hope that China shouldcan get along well with other countries.

It should either be "I hope that China can" or "I think that China should".

Thisat way, Chinese learners will become more and morsteadily increase.

I don't think China has behaved well, so it seems like many countries don't like China.

I feel sad about it.

If I were the president of China, I would make a big reform tos in China, including to the social system and the diplomatic policy to make China ait a more welcomed country.

All Chinese learners, please write more.

I am always here waiting to correct your journals.

Thank you very much.

Feedback

By the most recent data I can find (from 2016), Chinese is the 7th most commonly studied foreign language in American colleges with 3.7% of students studying it. It's also the second most popular non-European language after Japanese. The Chinese government is definitely no well liked over here, but I think another thing that could be holding Chinese back is a lack of internationally popular entertainment to get people interested in it, such as what Japan and more recently Korea have been putting out.

Jack's avatar
Jack

June 28, 2022

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Thank you very much.

It's been a long time since I have seen Chinese writing here and I worry so much about it.

If I can see many Chinese writings here, I will be very happy because I can have the chance to help them, and that means that Chinese is popular.

Less people learning Chinese is not a good sign. I think that means that China is not welcome.

I hope that China can get along well with other countries. That way, Chinese learners will steadily increase.

I don't think China has behaved well, so it seems like many countries don't like China. I feel sad about it.

If I were the president of China, I would make big reforms in China, including to the social system and diplomatic policy, to make it a more welcomed country.

All Chinese learners, please write more. I am always here waiting to correct your journals. Thank you very much.

I am always here waiting to correct your journals.


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Thank you very much.


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It's been a long time since I have seen Chinese writing and I worry so much about it.


It's been a long time since I have seen Chinese writing here and I worry so much about it.

It wasn't clear just from this sentence that you mean Chinese writing on langcorrect.

It's been a long time since I have seen Chinese writing on this website and I worry so much about it.

If I can see many Chinese writings here, I will be very happy because I can have the chance to help them, and that means that Chinese is popular.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If I can see many Chinese writings here, I will be very happy because I can have the chance to help them, and that means that Chinese is a popular language.

Less people learning Chinese is not a good sign.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think that means that China is not welcome.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think thatThat could means that China is not welcome.

I hope that China should get along well with other countries.


I hope that China shouldcan get along well with other countries.

It should either be "I hope that China can" or "I think that China should".

I hope that China shouldwill get along well with other countries.

This way, Chinese learners will become more and more.


Thisat way, Chinese learners will become more and morsteadily increase.

This way, Chinese learners will become more and morincrease.

I don't think China has behaved well, so it seems like many countries don't like China.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I feel sad about it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I feel sad about ithat.

If I were the president of China, I would make a big reform to China, including the social system and the diplomatic policy to make China a welcomed country.


If I were the president of China, I would make a big reform tos in China, including to the social system and the diplomatic policy to make China ait a more welcomed country.

If I were the president of China, I would makcreate a big reform toin China, including the social system and the diplomatic policy to make China a welcomed country.

All Chinese learners, please write more.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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