June 24, 2022
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My granddaughter is five years old and she is in the second grade in a municipal kindergarten.
The kindergarten is about 1.5 kilometers away from her home. Usually her parents take her to kindergarten. Sometimes, my wife or I take her to school.
I feel she is an introverted person. When she is with other people, she feels nervous, and once she meets a stranger she always keeps her distance from them. When she is at home, she behaves extroverted.
When she was little, she considered me a stranger. Every time she saw me, she became upset and resisted me coming to her house.
In recent years, she knows that I am her grandpa, so she has become friendly with me and has never driven me away again.
Now, when she is with me, she likes to pretend to blame me for some things. I know that she is pretending she is a spoiled child.
Recently, aside from studying in kindergarten, she also takes a painting class, which she needs to attend this afternoon.
This afternoon, my wife sent me a message asking me to pick my granddaughter up and take her to painting class.
Her painting class room is on the third floor of a mall, which is connected to my office building. What a coincidence.
Usually, when I take her and arrive at her painting class room, there are still twenty more minutes left before her class starts.
During this break, I often ask her if she wants something to eat and buy some snacks for her. However, she doesn't ask for too much. A little will be enough. She is never greedy.
Her painting class will be finished by 6:40 pm. I have to wait for her until then, and take her home.
Journal
My granddaughter is five years old, and she is in the second grade in a municipal kindergarten.
The kindergarten is about 1.5 kilometers away from her home.
Usually her parents take her to kindergarten.
Sometimes, my wife or I take her to school.
I feel shemy granddaughter is an introverted person.
When she is with other people, she feels nervous, and oncewhen she meets a stranger she always keeps her distance from them.
When she is at home, she behaves in a more extroverted way.
When she was little, she considered me a stranger.
Every time she saw me, she became upset and resisted me coming to her house.
In recent years, she knowshas realized that I am her grandpa, so she has become friendly with me and has nevno longer drivens me away again.
Now, when she is with me, she likes to pretend to blame me for some things.
I know that she is pretending she is a spoiled child.
Recently, aside from studying in kindergarten, she also takes a painting class, which she needs to attend. She must attend that class this afternoon.
I feel that breaking this sentence apart helps it flow better.
This afternoon, my wife sent me a message asking me to pick my granddaughter up and take her to painting class.
Her painting class room is on the third floor of a mall, which that is connected to my office building.
What a coincidence.
Usually,On the days when I take her and arrive at her painting class room, there are stillto class, we usually arrive twenty more minutes left before her class startsearly.
During this break, I often ask her if she wants something to eat and then buy some snacks for her.
However, she doesn't ask for too much.
A little will beis enough.
She is never greedy.
Her painting class will be finishend by 6:40 pm.
I have to wait for her until then, and take her home.
June 24, 2022
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My granddaughter is five years old, and she is in the second grade in a municipal kindergarten.
The kindergarten is about 1.5 kilometers away from her home. Usually her parents take her to kindergarten. Sometimes, my wife or I take her to school.
I feel my granddaughter is an introverted person. When she is with other people, she feels nervous, and when she meets a stranger she always keeps her distance from them. When she is at home, she behaves in a more extroverted way.
When she was little, she considered me a stranger. Every time she saw me, she became upset and resisted me coming to her house.
In recent years, she has realized that I am her grandpa, so she has become friendly with me and no longer drives me away.
Now, when she is with me, she likes to pretend to blame me for some things. I know that she is pretending she is a spoiled child.
Recently, aside from studying in kindergarten, she also takes a painting class. She must attend that class this afternoon.
This afternoon, my wife sent me a message asking me to pick my granddaughter up and take her to painting class.
Her painting class is on the third floor of a mall that is connected to my office building. What a coincidence.
On the days when I take her to class, we usually arrive twenty minutes early.
During this break, I often ask her if she wants something to eat and then buy some snacks for her. However, she doesn't ask for too much. A little is enough. She is never greedy.
Her painting class will end by 6:40 pm. I have to wait for her until then and take her home.
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My granddaughter is five years old and she is in the second grade in a municipal kindergarten. My granddaughter is five years old, and she is in the second grade in a municipal kindergarten. |
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The kindergarten is about 1.5 kilometers away from her home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Usually her parents take her to kindergarten. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Sometimes, my wife or I take her to school. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I feel she is an introverted person. I feel |
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When she is with other people, she feels nervous, and once she meets a stranger she always keeps her distance from them. When she is with other people, she feels nervous, and |
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When she is at home, she behaves extroverted. When she is at home, she behaves in a more extroverted way. |
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When she was little, she considered me a stranger. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Every time she saw me, she became upset and resisted me coming to her house. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In recent years, she knows that I am her grandpa, so she has become friendly with me and has never driven me away again. In recent years, she |
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Now, when she is with me, she likes to pretend to blame me for some things. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I know that she is pretending she is a spoiled child. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Recently, aside from studying in kindergarten, she also takes a painting class, which she needs to attend this afternoon. Recently, aside from studying in kindergarten, she also takes a painting class I feel that breaking this sentence apart helps it flow better. |
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This afternoon, my wife sent me a message asking me to pick my granddaughter up and take her to painting class. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Her painting class room is on the third floor of a mall, which is connected to my office building. Her painting class |
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What a coincidence. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Usually, when I take her and arrive at her painting class room, there are still twenty more minutes left before her class starts.
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During this break, I often ask her if she wants something to eat and buy some snacks for her. During this break, I often ask her if she wants something to eat and then buy some snacks for her. |
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However, she doesn't ask for too much. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A little will be enough. A little |
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She is never greedy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Her painting class will be finished by 6:40 pm. Her painting class will |
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I have to wait for her until then, and take her home. I have to wait for her until then |
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