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Fuyang, called Ruyin, Shunchang and Yingzhou in ancient times, is located in the northwest of Anhui Province, at the southern end of North China Plain, with a total area of 10,118 square kilometers and a total population of 10.708 million. Fuyang is one of the few prefecture-level cities with a population of over 10 million in China. It has a long history and a rich collection of humanities. Fuyang has a good ecology and beautiful environment. Flowers bloom all over the city. The blue sky and clear water are pleasant. The Ying River and Quan River pass through its downtown. There are many wetlands and infinite scenery in its jurisdiction.

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Fuyang, called Ruyin, Shunchang and Yingzhou in ancient times, is located in the northwest of Anhui Province, at the southern end of North China Plain, with. It has a total area of 10,118 square kilometers and a total population of 10.708 million.

better to break into 2 sentences

Fuyang is one of the few prefecture-level cities with a population of over 10 million in China.

It has a long history and a rich collection of humanitiesulture.

"a rich collection of humanities" doesn't make sense because the term "humanities" refers to a group of subjects (languages, philosophy, etc).

Fuyang has a good ecologyical balance and beautiful environment.

Flowers bloom all over the city.

The blue sky and clear water are pleasant.

The Ying River and Quan River pass through its downtownthe city center.

There are many wetlands and seemingly infinite scenery in its jurisdiction.

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Fuyang, called Ruyin, Shunchang and Yingzhou in ancient times, is located in the northwest of Anhui Province, at the southern end of North China Plain, with a total area of 10,118 square kilometers and a total population of 10.708 million.


Fuyang, called Ruyin, Shunchang and Yingzhou in ancient times, is located in the northwest of Anhui Province, at the southern end of North China Plain, with. It has a total area of 10,118 square kilometers and a total population of 10.708 million.

better to break into 2 sentences

Fuyang is one of the few prefecture-level cities with a population of over 10 million in China.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It has a long history and a rich collection of humanities.


It has a long history and a rich collection of humanitiesulture.

"a rich collection of humanities" doesn't make sense because the term "humanities" refers to a group of subjects (languages, philosophy, etc).

Fuyang has a good ecology and beautiful environment.


Fuyang has a good ecologyical balance and beautiful environment.

Flowers bloom all over the city.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The blue sky and clear water are pleasant.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The Ying River and Quan River pass through its downtown.


The Ying River and Quan River pass through its downtownthe city center.

There are many wetlands and infinite scenery in its jurisdiction.


There are many wetlands and seemingly infinite scenery in its jurisdiction.

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