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June 22, 2022

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Fuyang is a prefectural level city located in the northwest part of Anhui province, China.

Where the city is located is a vast plain without any mountains, and fertile farmland is everywhere.

The city has a large population. It used to be the most populated city in Anhui province. Even now, it's the second most populated city in Anhui province.

Because of the large population, per capita GDP is not high, but the total amount is large.

Transportation and commercials here are very developed. There is an airport, a high speed train station, an ordinary train station and several long distance bus stations in this city, as well as ten modern commercial malls.

According to public information, the city covers a built-up urban area of about 160 square kilometers and has a population of about 1.6 million.

Before I wrote this essay, I just read news about Fuyang city. According to
"2022 City Business Charm Ranking" released by "first financial • new first tier city research institute", Fuyang ranked 63rd among Chinese cities and the 2nd among Anhui cities. The first place city in Anhui province is the capital Hefei.

Fuyang is my home city. I studied here for three years in my teenage years and I have been working here for 34 years already. I have a deep affection for it.

This morning, I found some beautiful photos of the city. Let me share them with you.

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Fuyang is a prefectural level city located in the northwest part of Anhui province, China.

Where tThe city is located isn a vast plain without any mountains, and fertile farmland is everywhere.

The city has a large population.

Even now, it's the second most populated city in Anhui province.

Because of the large population, the per capita GDP is not high, but the total amount is large.

Transportation and commercials here are very developed.

There is an airport, a high speed train station, an ordinary train station and several long distance bus stations in this city, as well as ten modern commercial malls.

According to public information, the city covers a built-up urban area of about 160 square kilometers and has a population of about 1.6 million.

Before I wrote this essay, I just read news about Fuyang city.

According to

"2022 City Business Charm Ranking" released by "first financial • new first tier city research institute", Fuyang ranked 63rd among Chinese cities and the 2nd among Anhui cities.

The first place city in Anhui province is the capital Hefei.

Fuyang is my home city.

I studied here for three years in my teenage years, and I have been working here for 34 years already.

I have a deep affection for it.

This morning, I found some beautiful photos of the city.

Let me share them with you.

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Jack

June 22, 2022

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Fuyang is a prefectural level city located in the northwest part of Anhui province, China.


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Where the city is located is a vast plain without any mountains, and fertile farmland is everywhere.


Where tThe city is located isn a vast plain without any mountains, and fertile farmland is everywhere.

The city has a large population.


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It used to be the most populated city in Anhui province.


Even now, it's the second most populated city in Anhui province.


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Because of the large population, per capita GDP is not high, but the total amount is large.


Because of the large population, the per capita GDP is not high, but the total amount is large.

Transportation and commercials here are very developed.


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There is an airport, a high speed train station, an ordinary train station and several long distance bus stations in this city, as well as ten modern commercial malls.


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According to public information, the city covers a built-up urban area of about 160 square kilometers and has a population of about 1.6 million.


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Before I wrote this essay, I just read news about Fuyang city.


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According to


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"2022 City Business Charm Ranking" released by "first financial • new first tier city research institute", Fuyang ranked 63rd among Chinese cities and the 2nd among Anhui cities.


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The first place city in Anhui province is the capital Hefei.


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Fuyang is my home city.


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I studied here for three years in my teenage years and I have been working here for 34 years already.


I studied here for three years in my teenage years, and I have been working here for 34 years already.

I have a deep affection for it.


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This morning, I found some beautiful photos of the city.


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Let me share them with you.


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