June 16, 2022
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This afternoon, I picked my granddaughter up for her painting training class.
When I was in my office, I received a WeChat massage from my wife. She let me pick up my granddaughter this afternoon. Her message attached a notification released by my granddaughter's kindergarten.
The notification said that due to the Covid situation, children didn't go to school in April, so the kindergarten would refund the room and board to every student. The procedure was that parents should go to the kindergarten between 3:50 pm and 4:40 pm; signed first and showed their WeChat collection code, then the teacher would refund the room and board to them through their WeChat. After that, parents could take their child back.
I arrived at the kindergarten at 4:35 pm. I went through all the formalities and picked her up.
Her painting training institute was on the third floor in a modern mall which was connected with my office building, so it was very near to my office.
When we entered the mall, I asked her if she wanted to drink something. She told me she only wanted to eat some cakes. We entered a bake shop on the first floor and bought a portion of egg cake and a bottle of orange juice.
The painting class would be from 5:20 pm to 6:40 pm. When we arrived at the institute, it was only 5:00 pm, so we still had 20 minutes left before her class started.
I was supposed to wait for her until her lesson ended and took her home. So I just sat in the reception room while she took her lessons.
At 5:50 pm, my son called me and told me he was going to come to pick her up and I didn't need to take her home today. At 6:20 pm, he arrived, then I drove home alone.
This afternoon, I picked my granddaughter up forom her painting training class.
When I was in my office, I received a WeChat maessage from my wife.
She let meAllowing me to pick up my granddaughter this afternoon.
Her message had an attached a notification released byce from my granddaughter's kindergarten.
The notification said that due to the Covid situation, children didn't go to school in April, so the kindergarten would refund the room and board tofor every student.
The procedurelan was that parents should go to the kindergarten between 3:50 pm and 4:40 pm; signed first and in and then showed their WeChat collection code, thenso the teacher wcould refund the room and board to them through theirvia WeChat.
After that, the parents could take their child back.home.
I arrived at the kindergarten at 4:35 pm.
I went through all the formalities andalong with the plan and then picked her up.
Her painting training instituteschool was on the third floor inof a modern mall which was connected with my office building, so it was very near to my office.
When we entered the mall, I asked her if she wanted to drink something.something to drink.
She told me she only wanted to eathave some cakes.
We entered a bcake shop (bakery) on the first floor and bought a portion of egg cake and a bottle of orange juice.
The painting class would be from 5:20 pm to 6:40 pm.
When we arrived at the instituteclass, it was only 5:00 pm, so we still had 20 minutes lefto wait before her class started.
I was supposed to wait for her until her lesson ended and tookhen take her home.
So I just sat in the reception room while she took her lessons.
At 5:50 pm, my son called me and told me he was going to come to pick her up and I didn't need to take her home today.
At 6:20 pm, he arrived, then I drove home alone.
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June 16, 2022
This afternoon, I picked my granddaughter up forom her painting training class.
From her kindergarten to her painting school.
June 16, 2022
She let meAllowing me to pick up my granddaughter this afternoon.
Asked me to pick up my granddaughter
June 16, 2022
The procedurelan was that parents should go to the kindergarten between 3:50 pm and 4:40 pm; signed first and in and then showed their WeChat collection code, thenso the teacher wcould refund the room and board to them through theirvia WeChat.
Through via?
June 16, 2022
Thank you very much.
June 16, 2022
From her kindergarten to her painting school.
Sorry misinterpreted what you meant! I'd say, 'This afternoon, I picked my granddaughter up from kindergarten to take her to her painting class.'.
June 16, 2022
Through via?
'Through' also works in the same way.
June 16, 2022
Asked me to pick up my granddaughter
I'd say, 'Asking me to pick up my granddaughter this afternoon'.
This afternoon, I picked up my granddaughter up for her painting training class.
When I was in my office, I received a WeChat maessage from my wife.
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This afternoon, I picked my granddaughter up for her painting training class. This afternoon, I picked up my granddaughter up for her painting training class. This afternoon, I picked my granddaughter up f |
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When I was in my office, I received a WeChat massage from my wife. When I was in my office, I received a WeChat m When I was in my office, I received a WeChat m |
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She let me pick up my granddaughter this afternoon.
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Her message attached a notification released by my granddaughter's kindergarten. Her message had an attached |
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The notification said that due to the Covid situation, children didn't go to school in April, so the kindergarten would refund the room and board to every student. The notification said that due to the Covid situation, children didn't go to school in April, so the kindergarten would refund the room and board |
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The procedure was that parents should go to the kindergarten between 3:50 pm and 4:40 pm; signed first and showed their WeChat collection code, then the teacher would refund the room and board to them through their WeChat. The p |
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After that, parents could take their child back. After that, the parents could take their child |
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I arrived at the kindergarten at 4:35 pm. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I went through all the formalities and picked her up. I went |
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Her painting training institute was on the third floor in a modern mall which was connected with my office building, so it was very near to my office. Her painting |
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When we entered the mall, I asked her if she wanted to drink something. When we entered the mall, I asked her if she wanted |
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She told me she only wanted to eat some cakes. She told me she only wanted to |
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We entered a bake shop on the first floor and bought a portion of egg cake and a bottle of orange juice. We entered a |
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The painting class would be from 5:20 pm to 6:40 pm. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When we arrived at the institute, it was only 5:00 pm, so we still had 20 minutes left before her class started. When we arrived at the |
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I was supposed to wait for her until her lesson ended and took her home. I was supposed to wait for her until her lesson ended and t |
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So I just sat in the reception room while she took her lessons. So I |
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At 5:50 pm, my son called me and told me he was going to come to pick her up and I didn't need to take her home today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At 6:20 pm, he arrived, then I drove home alone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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