June 15, 2022
Journal
My teacups. Part 2
Soon after, I bought this kind of teacup on a commercial platform.
After using it a few times, I lost fresh feelings about it and stopped using it. The main reason, I think, maybe that its lid was too clumsy and I was not used to it.
A few months later, I thought I should form the habit of drinking tea, because I felt I was not a young man anymore and I should learn to take good care of myself, so I decided to buy another teacup.
Because it was winter back then, I felt I should buy an insulation cup so that the tea water wouldn't be cold very quickly.
I checked insulated cups on the internet to find out which brand had better quality and finally, I made a decision to buy a Japanese brand "zojirush".
It was a 360 ml volume cup and really had a good quality of keeping warm. But it didn't have a filter screen, so often times, the tea leaves would enter my mouth when I drank tea.
I felt I should buy another teacup with a filter screen, thus it not only can prevent tea leaves from entering my mouth, but also be very useful for me to wash tea leaves before I make tea.
I still wanted to buy the "zojirush" brand because its keeping- warm function was very effective.
To be continued. I sincerely thank you for your trust and support.
After using it a few times, I lost fresh feelings about iit became old news fast and I stopped using it.
"I lost fresh feelings about it", sounds quite poetic and not the correct register for this piece of writing.
I gave an example of what you could write instead.
The main reason, I think, maybe that is that maybe its lid was too clumsyawkward and I was not used to it.
Wouldn't use clumsy, here maybe - fiddly, awkward
Because it was winter back then, I felt I should buy an insulation cup so that the tea water wouldn't be cold verycool down as quickly.
You could say - wouldn't cool down as quickly or heat wouldn't escape as fast
I checked insulated cups on the internet to find out which brand had betterthe best quality and finally, I made athe decision to buy a Japanese brand "zZojirush".
It was a 360 ml volume cup and had really had a good quality of keeping warmgreat heat insulation.
I would remove 'volume' here, it's unneeded
But it didn't have a filter screen, so often times, the tea leaves would enter my mouth when I drank tea.
I felt I should buy another teacup with a filter screen, thus it can not only can prevent tea leaves from entering my mouth, but also be very useful for me to wash tea leaves before I make tea.
I still wanted to buy the "zZojirush" brand because its keeping- warm functionheat insulation feature was very effective.
When talking about a company or brand, capitalise the first letter - amazon / Amazon - subway / Subway etc
When talking about keeping something like tea warm in a cup, you would use a word such as insulation or heat insulation
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:3 ! Well done! You are improving each time. Lovely story and very well written. I know articles - a/an/the in English are very difficult to understand and use 100% of the time correctly but this is where you make the majority of your mistakes. There are some exercises you can do to practice them, writing helps too but mostly you have to "play it by ear". Keep up the great work!
June 15, 2022
Thank you very much. You are very kind and helpful and I am very grateful.
June 15, 2022
Thank you very much. You are very kind and helpful and I am very grateful.
Awh, thank you so much! Always happy to help! :3
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My teacups. |
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Part 2 |
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Soon after, I bought this kind of teacup on a commercial platform. |
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After using it a few times, I lost fresh feelings about it and stopped using it. After using it a few times, "I lost fresh feelings about it", sounds quite poetic and not the correct register for this piece of writing. I gave an example of what you could write instead. |
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The main reason, I think, maybe that its lid was too clumsy and I was not used to it. The main reason, I think Wouldn't use clumsy, here maybe - fiddly, awkward |
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A few months later, I thought I should form the habit of drinking tea, because I felt I was not a young man anymore and I should learn to take good care of myself, so I decided to buy another teacup. |
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Because it was winter back then, I felt I should buy an insulation cup so that the tea water wouldn't be cold very quickly. Because it was winter back then, I felt I should buy an insulation cup so that the tea water wouldn't You could say - wouldn't cool down as quickly or heat wouldn't escape as fast |
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I checked insulated cups on the internet to find out which brand had better quality and finally, I made a decision to buy a Japanese brand "zojirush". I checked insulated cups on the internet to find out which brand had |
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It was a 360 ml volume cup and really had a good quality of keeping warm. It was a 360 ml I would remove 'volume' here, it's unneeded |
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But it didn't have a filter screen, so often times, the tea leaves would enter my mouth when I drank tea. But it didn't have a filter |
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I felt I should buy another teacup with a filter screen, thus it not only can prevent tea leaves from entering my mouth, but also be very useful for me to wash tea leaves before I make tea. I felt I should buy another teacup with a filter |
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I still wanted to buy the "zojirush" brand because its keeping- warm function was very effective. I still wanted to buy the " When talking about a company or brand, capitalise the first letter - amazon / Amazon - subway / Subway etc When talking about keeping something like tea warm in a cup, you would use a word such as insulation or heat insulation |
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To be continued. |
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I sincerely thank you for your trust and support. |
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