June 15, 2022
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My teacups
Two years ago, my oldest brother returned to the city I lived in to see my mom and I saw the teacup he was using, which I thought was very nice.
The teacup was not like an ordinary one. The lid of it actually connected another smaller cup above it and inside the lid, there is a filter screen. The smaller cup was used to hold tea leaves.
When people make tea, they pour boiling water into the teacup first, then cover the lid. Afterwards, stand the cup upside down.
Therefore, the boiling water goes down into the smaller cup below and the tea leaves are soaked in boiling water, so the tea is made.
A few minutes later, the tea will be done. After that, flip back the teacup and the tea water flows into the main teacup again, so the tea leaves and the tea water are separated.
After I saw this kind of tea cup, I wanted to buy one late.
To be continued. Sincerely thank you for your trust and support.
Journal
My teacups
Two years ago, my oldest brother returned to the city I lived in to see my mom and I saw the teacup he was using, which I thought was very nice.
Did he come to see both your mother and you?
If so it might be better to say "to see my mum and I. When he came I saw..."
Or if he just came to visit your mother it might be better to say "To see my mum.
The teacup was not like an ordinary one.
The lid of it actually connected to another smaller cup above it and inside the lid, there is awas filter screen.
The smaller cup was used to hold tea leaves.
When people make tea, they pour boiling water into the teacup first, then cover the lid.
Afterwards, they stand the cup upside down.
Therefore, the boiling water goes down into the smaller cup below and the tea leaves are soaked in boiling water, so the tea is made.
A few minutes later, the tea will be done.
After that, flip back the teacup back and the tea water flows into the main teacup again, so the tea leaves and the tea water are separated.
You don't necessarily need to repeat "teacup", you can change between cup and teacup
After I saw this kind of tea cup, I wanted to buy one late.
To be continued.
Sincerely thank youThank you sincerely for your trust and support.
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Great writing! It sounds really cool and I like the picture you attached :)
(also you didn't spell mom wrong, I just write it as mum, with a "u", as I'm English and not American. You can use either spelling! It is interesting to see the difference between American and British English :D )
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Two years ago, my oldest brother returned to the city I lived in to see my mom and I saw the teacup he was using, which I thought was very nice. Two years ago, my oldest brother returned to the city I lived in to see my mom and I saw the teacup he was using, which I thought was very nice. Did he come to see both your mother and you? If so it might be better to say "to see my mum and I. When he came I saw..." Or if he just came to visit your mother it might be better to say "To see my mum. |
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The teacup was not like an ordinary one. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The lid of it actually connected another smaller cup above it and inside the lid, there is a filter screen. The lid of it actually connected to another smaller cup above it and inside the lid, there |
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The smaller cup was used to hold tea leaves. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When people make tea, they pour boiling water into the teacup first, then cover the lid. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Afterwards, stand the cup upside down. Afterwards, they stand the cup upside down. |
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Therefore, the boiling water goes down into the smaller cup below and the tea leaves are soaked in boiling water, so the tea is made. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A few minutes later, the tea will be done. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After that, flip back the teacup and the tea water flows into the main teacup again, so the tea leaves and the tea water are separated. After that, flip You don't necessarily need to repeat "teacup", you can change between cup and teacup |
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After I saw this kind of tea cup, I wanted to buy one late. After I saw this kind of tea cup, I wanted to buy one |
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To be continued. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Sincerely thank you for your trust and support.
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