June 14, 2022
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What is the meaning of life? I have been asking myself for many years, but so far I haven't gotten the right answer.
Coming to this world is not our choice, it's only random. However, it is still a good thing.
I think the meaning of life is not to be an official or to be a rich man. It is not and it shouldn't.
But since we humans came to this world, the first thing we should do was to live well and love our parents, children, as well as our friends and relatives.
At least, we should have a positive attitude towards our lives. Always think good and do good, no matter how ordinary we will be.
Maybe we are weak and incapable, but there will always be a thing that we can do to support ourselves.
God is just. He treats everyone fairly. He always gives each one a road. Don't be afraid that we may not be excellent enough. As long as we are healthy, everything will go well.
I am an ordinary person and I have been trying my best to live. Although I haven't achieved great success, I have tried my best.
I still don't know what the meaning of life is. I only know that we should live healthily, happily, positively and diligently.
Journal
What is the meaning of life?
I have been asking myself for many years, but so far I haven't gotten the right answer.
Coming to this world is not our choice, it's only random.
However, it is still a good thing.
It is not and it, nor shouldn' it.
I would connect this to the previous sentence. The "It is not" is redundant in this case.
But since we humans caome to this world, the first thing we should do wais to live well and love our parents, children, as well as our friends and relatives.
If you meant to write this in the past tense, then there would need to be significant changes; however, I believe you meant this in the present. In this case, we just need to match up the verb tenses.
At least, we should have a positive attitude towards our lives.
A, and always think good and do good, no matter how ordinary we will be.
This also isn't incorrect, but it might flow better if you connect it with the previous sentence.
Maybe we are weak and incapable, but there will always be a thing that we can do to support ourselves.
God is just.
He treats everyone fairly.
He always gives each one a road.
Don't be afraid that we may not be excellent enough.
As long as we are healthy, everything will go well.
I am an ordinary person and I have been trying my best to live.
Although I haven't achieved great success, I have tried my best.
I still don't know what the meaning of life is.
I only know that we should live healthily, happily, positively and diligently.
Feedback
Your overall grasp of grammar is very good. The only thing I would work on is combining ideas and sentences together through conjunctions.
June 14, 2022
Thank you very much for your encouragement.
Journal
What is the meaning of life?
I have been asking myself this for many years, but so far I haven't gottenfound the right answer.
Coming to this world is not our choice, it's only randomjust chance.
However, it is still a good thing.
I think the meaning of life is not to be an official or to be a rich man.
"to be" doesn't need to be repeated
It is nosn't and it shouldn't.
I think it sounds better to use "n't" twice
But since we humans came to this world, the first thing we should do wais to live well and love our parents, children, as well as our friends and relatives.
At least, we should have a positive attitude towards our lives.
Always think good and do good, no matter how ordinary we will be.
Maybe we are weak and incapable, but there will always be a thing that we can do to support ourselves.
God is just.
He treats everyone fairly.
He always gives each veryone a road.
Don't be afraid that we may not be excellent enough.
As long as we are healthy, everything will go well.
I am an ordinary person and I have been trying my best to live.
Although I haven't achieved great success, I have tried my best.
I still don't know what the meaning of life is.
I only know that we should live healthily, happily, positively and diligently.
Feedback
Amazing writing! What you say is very true and inspirational, keep on learning :)
June 14, 2022
Thank you very much for correcting my journals.
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