June 3, 2022
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Customs of the Dragon Boat Festival in My Area.
I live in the mid-east part of China, where there is a big plain.
The dragon boat festival is a traditional Chinese festival. I have celebrated it since I was a kid.
We have a few traditional customs during the dragon boat festival.
Making and eating rice dumplings. Every year before the festival, families make dumplings. They use rice and reed leaves to make it and like to fill it with sugar or jujube.
Many southerners like to fill rice dumplings with salty meat, but I am not used to it.
Hanging wormwood. Before the festival, people cut some fresh wormwood from fields and tighten them into bunches. Then they hang the bunches of wormwood on the top of their doors and windows with the top of the wormwood down.
The dragon boat festival is on the lunar May fifth. People think it is time that all the poisonous insects are active, so they hang the wormwood to repel the harmful insects.
Wearing fragrant sachets. Before the festival, parents like to make a few small fragrant sachets for their children.
They find some fragrant plants and grind them into powder, then fill the powder in sachets that are already prepared.
Parents would use threads with different colors to embroider beautiful patterns on the sachets.
All the sachets have long and thin colorful ropes which are used to hang the sachets on children's necks to repel the poisonous insects.
These are the three most popular customs during the dragon boat festival in my area. So far, the customs haven’t changed.
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June 3, 2022
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I live in the mid-eastern part of China, where there is a big plain.
They use rice and reed leaves to make ithe dumplings and like to fill ithem with sugar or jujube.
Then they hang the bunches of wormwood on the top of their doors and windows with the top of the wormwood pointing down.
They find some fragrant plants and grind them into a powder, then fill the powder in sachets that are already prepared.pre-prepared sachets with the powder.
All the sachets have long and thin colorful ropes which are used to hang the sachetsm on children's necks to repel the poisonous insects.
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June 3, 2022
Thank you very much.
Customs of the Dragon Boat Festival in My Area.
I live in the mid-eastern part of China, where there is a big plain.
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional Chinese festival. I have celebrated it since I was a kid.
We have a few traditional customs during the dragon boat festival.
Making and eating rice dumplings. Every year before the festival, families make dumplings. They use rice and reed leaves to make the dumplings and like to fill them with sugar or jujube.
Many southerners like to fill rice dumplings with salty meat, but I am not used to it.
Hanging wormwood. Before the festival, people cut some fresh wormwood from fields and tighten them into bunches. Then they hang the bunches of wormwood on top of their doors and windows with the top of the wormwood pointing down.
The Dragon Boat Festival is on the lunar May fifth. People think it is time that all the poisonous insects are active, so they hang the wormwood to repel the harmful insects.
Wearing fragrant sachets. Before the festival, parents like to make a few small fragrant sachets for their children.
They find some fragrant plants and grind them into a powder, then fill the pre-prepared sachets with the powder.
Parents would use threads with different colors to embroider beautiful patterns on the sachets.
All the sachets have long and thin colorful ropes which are used to hang them on children's necks to repel the poisonous insects.
These are the three most popular customs during the Dragon Boat Festival in my area. So far, the customs haven’t changed.
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Customs of the Dragon Boat Festival in My Area. |
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I live in the mid-east part of China, where there is a big plain. I live in the mid-eastern part of China, where there is a big plain. I live in the mid-east part of China, where there |
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The dragon boat festival is a traditional Chinese festival. The Capitalisation :3 |
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I have celebrated it since I was a kid. |
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We have a few traditional customs during the dragon boat festival. We have a few traditional customs during the |
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Making and eating rice dumplings. |
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Every year before the festival, families make dumplings. |
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They use rice and reed leaves to make it and like to fill it with sugar or jujube. They use rice and reed leaves to make They use rice and reed leaves to make |
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Many southerners like to fill rice dumplings with salty meat, but I am not used to it. |
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Hanging wormwood. |
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Before the festival, people cut some fresh wormwood from fields and tighten them into bunches. |
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Then they hang the bunches of wormwood on the top of their doors and windows with the top of the wormwood down. Then they hang the bunches of wormwood on |
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The dragon boat festival is on the lunar May fifth. The |
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People think it is time that all the poisonous insects are active, so they hang the wormwood to repel the harmful insects. |
|
Wearing fragrant sachets. |
|
Before the festival, parents like to make a few small fragrant sachets for their children. |
|
They find some fragrant plants and grind them into powder, then fill the powder in sachets that are already prepared. They find some fragrant plants and grind them into a powder, then fill |
|
Parents would use threads with different colors to embroider beautiful patterns on the sachets. |
|
All the sachets have long and thin colorful ropes which are used to hang the sachets on children's necks to repel the poisonous insects. All the sachets have long and thin colorful ropes which are used to hang the |
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These are the three most popular customs during the dragon boat festival in my area. |
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So far, the customs haven’t changed. |
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