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Jack

April 15, 2022

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I was very excited last night when I learned that my city's lock down would end by 8 pm.

I noticed that information at 7:34 pm, ahead of the unlock down time and I didn't even believe it at first. But then, I proved the information in different ways.

This lockdown started on the 6th of this month. It was all of a sudden, no one knew it in advance.

During the lockdown, we couldn't leave my residential community. Only one person in a family can go out of the community to buy daily necessities every two days.

Shops were closed, transport was closed, including buses, taxis, trains, high speed trains and the airport.

The city was empty. No vehicles, no people, looked like it was dead.

During the lockdown, every person in the city had to take the Covid test. We had the test 5 times in total. If someone's test was positive, they would be sent to special hospitals.

As far as I know, for this wave of pandemic, our county-level district enables 34 centralized isolation points and more than 150 infected cases were found, but most of them were asymptomatic cases.

Fortunately, the lockdown finally ended. Walking freely on the streets is so nice. Freedom is precious!

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I noticedlearnt that information at 7:34 pm, ahead of the unlock down timeending and I didn't even believe it at first.

"unlock" is usually the correct opposite of "lock" but lockdowns don't "unlock", they end

It was all of a sudden, no one knew about it in advance.

Only one person in a family canould go out of the community to buy daily necessities every two days.

"could" rather than "can" because this sentence is in the past tense

No vehicles, no people, it looked like it was dead.

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Jack

April 18, 2022

5

Thank you very much

I was very excited last night when I learned that my city's lock down would end by 8 pm.

Lockdown is one word when it's a noun, it would only be two words if you're using it as a verb (ex. when the mayor locked down the city)

We hadtook the test 5 times in total.

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Jack

April 15, 2022

5

Thank you very much.

I was very excited last night when I learned that my city's lockdown would end by 8 pm.

I heard that information at 7:34 pm, right before the lockdown ended, and I didn't even believe it at first. But then, I was able to verify the news in different ways.

This lockdown started on the 6th of this month. It was very sudden; no one knew of the lockdown in advance.

During the lockdown, I couldn't leave my residential community. Only one person in a family could go out of the community to buy daily necessities every two days.

Shops were closed, and transport was closed, including buses, taxis, trains, high speed trains, and the airport.

The city was empty. No vehicles, no people; it looked like it was dead.

During the lockdown, every person in the city had to take the Covid test. We took the test 5 times in total.

If someone's test was positive, they would be sent to a special hospital.

As far as I know, for this wave of pandemic, our county-level district set up 34 centralized isolation points, and more than 150 new infections were found, but most of them were asymptomatic.

Fortunately, the lockdown finally ended. Walking freely on the streets is so nice. Freedom is precious!

Journal

I was very excited last night when I learned that my city's lock down would end by 8 pm.

I noticedlearned (heard, ettc.) that information at 7:34 pm, ahead ofright before the unlock down timeended, and I didn't even believe it at first.

But then, I proved the informationwas able to verify the news in different ways.

This lockdown started on the 6th of this month.

It was all of avery sudden,; no one knew itof the lockdown in advance.

During the lockdown, weI couldn't leave my residential community.

Only one person in a family canould go out of the community to buy daily necessities every two days.

Shops were closed, and transport was closed, including buses, taxis, trains, high speed trains, and the airport.

The city was empty.

No vehicles, no people,; it looked like it was dead.

During the lockdown, every person in the city had to take the Covid test.

We hadtook the test 5 times in total.

If someone's test was positive, they would be sent to a special hospitals.

As far as I know, for this wave of pandemic, our county-level district enablesset up 34 centralized isolation points and more than 150 new infected ions (cases) were found, but most of them were asymptomatic cases.

Fortunately, the lockdown finally ended.

Walking freely on the streets is so nice.

Freedom is precious!

Jack's avatar
Jack

April 15, 2022

5

Thank you very much.

I was very excited last night when I learned that my city's lockdown would end by 8 pm.

I heard that information at 7:34 pm, right before the lockdown ended, and I didn't even believe it at first. But then, I was able to verify the news in different ways.

This lockdown started on the 6th of this month. It was very sudden; no one knew of the lockdown in advance.

During the lockdown, I couldn't leave my residential community. Only one person in a family could go out of the community to buy daily necessities every two days.

Shops were closed, and transport was closed, including buses, taxis, trains, high speed trains, and the airport.

The city was empty. No vehicles, no people; it looked like it was dead.

During the lockdown, every person in the city had to take the Covid test. We took the test 5 times in total.

If someone's test was positive, they would be sent to a special hospital.

As far as I know, for this wave of pandemic, our county-level district set up 34 centralized isolation points, and more than 150 new infections were found, but most of them were asymptomatic.

Fortunately, the lockdown finally ended. Walking freely on the streets is so nice. Freedom is precious!

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I was very excited last night when I learned that my city's lock down would end by 8 pm.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was very excited last night when I learned that my city's lock down would end by 8 pm.

Lockdown is one word when it's a noun, it would only be two words if you're using it as a verb (ex. when the mayor locked down the city)

I noticed that information at 7:34 pm, ahead of the unlock down time and I didn't even believe it at first.


I noticedlearned (heard, ettc.) that information at 7:34 pm, ahead ofright before the unlock down timeended, and I didn't even believe it at first.

I noticedlearnt that information at 7:34 pm, ahead of the unlock down timeending and I didn't even believe it at first.

"unlock" is usually the correct opposite of "lock" but lockdowns don't "unlock", they end

But then, I proved the information in different ways.


But then, I proved the informationwas able to verify the news in different ways.

This lockdown started on the 6th of this month.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was all of a sudden, no one knew it in advance.


It was all of avery sudden,; no one knew itof the lockdown in advance.

It was all of a sudden, no one knew about it in advance.

During the lockdown, we couldn't leave my residential community.


During the lockdown, weI couldn't leave my residential community.

Only one person in a family can go out of the community to buy daily necessities every two days.


Only one person in a family canould go out of the community to buy daily necessities every two days.

Only one person in a family canould go out of the community to buy daily necessities every two days.

"could" rather than "can" because this sentence is in the past tense

Shops were closed, transport was closed, including buses, taxis, trains, high speed trains and the airport.


Shops were closed, and transport was closed, including buses, taxis, trains, high speed trains, and the airport.

The city was empty.


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No vehicles, no people, looked like it was dead.


No vehicles, no people,; it looked like it was dead.

No vehicles, no people, it looked like it was dead.

During the lockdown, every person in the city had to take the Covid test.


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We had the test 5 times in total.


We hadtook the test 5 times in total.

We hadtook the test 5 times in total.

If someone's test was positive, they would be sent to special hospitals.


If someone's test was positive, they would be sent to a special hospitals.

As far as I know, for this wave of pandemic, our county-level district enables 34 centralized isolation points and more than 150 infected cases were found, but most of them were asymptomatic cases.


As far as I know, for this wave of pandemic, our county-level district enablesset up 34 centralized isolation points and more than 150 new infected ions (cases) were found, but most of them were asymptomatic cases.

Fortunately, the lockdown finally ended.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Walking freely on the streets is so nice.


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Freedom is precious!


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