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Jack

April 9, 2022

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Only over a night, the city I live in was locked down.

Small roads that connect with neighboring communities were closed, shops on streets were closed, as well as the national roads through the city.

Public transportation stations were closed, long distance bus stations were closed, train stations were closed, high speed train stations were closed, as well as the airport.

In four days, citizens had three Covid tests.

Every family has only one person that can go out once every two days to buy daily necessities.

Life has stopped.

That is the present situation in the city.

The damn Covid virus!

I don't know when we will be allowed out.

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Only over a vernight, the city I live in whas been locked down.

If it's just over a single night, it's more natural to say "overnight"

Small roads that connect with neighboring communities weare closed, shops on the streets weare closed, as well as the national roads through the city.

If it's continuing until the present, I would suggest using the present tense instead

Public transportation stations were closed has been shut down, long distance bus stations weare closed, train stations weare closed, high speed train stations weare closed, as well as the airport.

In four days, citizens hadeach had to take three Covid tests.

Every family has only one person that can go out once every two daysOnce every two days, one person per family is allowed to go out to buy daily necessities.

Thatis is the present situation in the city.

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Great writing and sorry to hear about the lockdown, sounds so difficult :( hope it's over soon.

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Jack

April 11, 2022

5

thank you very much.

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Only over a night, the city I live in was locked down.


Only over a vernight, the city I live in whas been locked down.

If it's just over a single night, it's more natural to say "overnight"

Small roads that connect with neighboring communities were closed, shops on streets were closed, as well as the national roads through the city.


Small roads that connect with neighboring communities weare closed, shops on the streets weare closed, as well as the national roads through the city.

If it's continuing until the present, I would suggest using the present tense instead

Public transportation stations were closed, long distance bus stations were closed, train stations were closed, high speed train stations were closed, as well as the airport station.


In four days, citizens had three Covid tests.


In four days, citizens hadeach had to take three Covid tests.

Every family has only one person that can go out once every two days to buy daily necessities.


Every family has only one person that can go out once every two daysOnce every two days, one person per family is allowed to go out to buy daily necessities.

Life has stopped.


That is the present situation in the city.


Thatis is the present situation in the city.

The damn Covid virus!


I don't know when we will be unlocked.


Public transportation stations were closed, long distance bus stations were closed, train stations were closed, high speed train stations were closed, as well as the airport.


Public transportation stations were closed has been shut down, long distance bus stations weare closed, train stations weare closed, high speed train stations weare closed, as well as the airport.

I don't know when we will be allowed out.


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