April 5, 2022
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The city I live in plants various trees and flowers, which leaves me a deep impression is cherry trees.
Since I rarely go out of my home and work place recently, I haven't found cherry blossoming that satisfies me so much.
This morning I drove my son to his workplace and saw some cherry trees on the streets that I think are much better than I saw in the early days.
The city I live in is divided into three districts. I work in Yingzhou District and my son works in Yingdong District. I rarely go to Yingdong if it's not necessary.
During the trip driving my son to his workplace, I noticed that many cherry trees are blossoming on both sides of the streets, so I decided to take some photos of them when I drive back.
Then I pulled my car into the free parking space in the slow lanes, found some cherry trees which are blooming and took photos, although I think I missed the best time of their blossoming.
I have learned that the best cherry blooming is in Japan, and I also know the domestic one is in Wuhan University, but I have never seen them in person.
Somehow, I don't think cherry blossoms in these two places can be better than those in my city, but I'm not sure.
I hope you can give me a comparison, or leave any comment after seeing the photos of the cherry blooming in our city.
The city I live in plants various trees and flowers, which leaves me a deep impression is cherry treestheir cherry tree leaves me with the greatest impression.
Since I am rarely go out of my home and work place recently, I haven't found cherry blossoming that satisfies me aso much.
Using 'as much' just infers that as you mentioned in your first line, you were usually left with a deep impression by cherry trees. 'As much' just signifies a lack of satisfaction in comparison.
This morning I drove my son to his workplace and saw some cherry trees on the streets that I think are much better than what I saw in the early days.
April 6, 2022
Thank you very much.
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Since I rarely go outventure outside of my home and work place recently, I haven't found any cherry blossomings that satisfies me so muchreally satisfy me.
This morning, I drove my son to his workplace and saw some cherry trees on the streets that I think are much better than what I saw ion the earlyier days.
I work in Yingzhou District, and my son works in Yingdong District.
I rarely go to Yingdong ifunless it's not necessary.
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Thenus, I pulled my car into the free parking space in the slow lanes, found some cherry trees which arein blooming, and took the photos, although I think I missed the best time of their peak blossoming period.
I have lhearned that the best cherry blooming isssoms worldwide are in Japan, and I also know thethe best domestic one iss are in Wuhan University, but I have neverot seen eithemr in person.
Somehow, I don't think the cherry blossoms in theose two places can be better than thosee ones in my city, but I'm not sure could be wrong.
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I hope you can give me ayour thoughts on comparisonng them, or leave any comment after seeing the photos of the cherry bloomingssoms in ourmy city.
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April 5, 2022
Thank you very much for your corrections. I modified it already.
The city I live in plants various trees and flowers, but what leaves a deep impression on me are cherry trees.
Since I rarely venture outside of my home and work place recently, I haven't found any cherry blossoms that really satisfy me.
This morning, I drove my son to his workplace and saw some cherry trees on the streets that are much better than what I saw on earlier days.
The city I live in is divided into three districts. I work in the Yingzhou District, and my son works in the Yingdong District. I rarely go to Yingdong unless it's necessary.
While I drove my son to his workplace, I noticed that many cherry trees are in bloom on both sides of the streets, so I decided to take some photos on my drive back.
Thus, I pulled my car into the free parking space in the slow lanes, found some cherry trees in bloom, and took the photos, although I think I missed their peak blossoming period.
I have heard that the best cherry blossoms worldwide are in Japan and I also know the best domestic ones are in Wuhan University, but I haven’t seen either in person.
Somehow, I don't think the cherry blossoms in those two places can be better than the ones in my city, but I could be wrong.
I hope you can give me your thoughts on comparing them, or leave any comment after seeing the photos of the cherry blossoms in my city.
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The city I live in plants various trees and flowers, which leaves me a deep impression is cherry trees. The city I live in plants various trees and flowers, The city I live in plants various trees and flowers, |
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Since I rarely go out of my home and work place recently, I haven't found cherry blossoming that satisfies me so much. Since I rarely Since I am rarely Using 'as much' just infers that as you mentioned in your first line, you were usually left with a deep impression by cherry trees. 'As much' just signifies a lack of satisfaction in comparison. |
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This morning I drove my son to his workplace and saw some cherry trees on the streets that I think are much better than I saw in the early days. This morning, I drove my son to his workplace and saw some cherry trees on the streets that This morning I drove my son to his workplace and saw some cherry trees on the streets that I think are much better than what I saw in the early days. |
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The city I live in is divided into three districts. |
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I work in Yingzhou District and my son works in Yingdong District. I work in Yingzhou District, and my son works in Yingdong District. |
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I rarely go to Yingdong if it's not necessary. I rarely go to Yingdong |
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During the trip driving my son to his workplace, I noticed that many cherry trees are blossoming on both sides of the streets, so I decided to take some photos of them when I drive back.
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Then I pulled my car into the free parking space in the slow lanes, found some cherry trees which are blooming and took photos, although I think I missed the best time of their blossoming. Th |
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I have learned that the best cherry blooming is in Japan, and I also know the domestic one is in Wuhan University, but I have never seen them in person. I have |
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Somehow, I don't think cherry blossoms in these two places can be better than those in my city, but I'm not sure. Somehow, I don't think the cherry blossoms in th "I'm not sure" isn't grammatically wrong, but kind of sounds off in this context, so I changed it to what would sound natural to me. |
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I hope you can give me a comparison, or leave any comment after seeing the photos of the cherry blooming in our city. I hope you can give me Not really sure what you mean by "give me a comparison", so took a guess. |
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