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April 1, 2022

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This morning, I will go to Mazhai township to see my agricultural science and technology demonstration households.

This work was launched by the National Agricultural Ministry and is implemented nationwide.

I will instruct seven farmers in total. Three of them plant sweet potatoes, one of them plants sesame, one of them plants sweet potatoes seedlings, two of them plants pumpkin.

My responsibility is to help them to solve the technical problems they meet in the process of their planting.

Of course, I am not an all-rounder, but I know many channels to get information. I may not know the specific issues, but I can ask other specialists for help or find the solution on the internet.

I have set up a WeChat group and will invite them in. If there is any new benefiting farmers policy, I will let them know for the first time. If they have any difficulties planting, they can let me know in the group at anytime.

Of course, I will go to their place to meet them in person and go to their farmland to see the situation of their plantings.

I will teach them how to make the most of the China Agricultural Technology Extension App. This app is very powerful. Its content is very rich, including laws and regulations, market price, operative technology, agricultural classroom, network book store and so on.

Although I am an agricultural science and technology person, it's the first time I interacted with farmers in person, so I cherish this opportunity.

I hope through my joint efforts with the demonstration households, they really achieve the purpose of increasing agricultural production and farmers' income.

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Three of them plant sweet potatoes, one of them plants sesame, one of them plants sweet potatoes seedlings, two of them plants pumpkin.

Three of them plant sweet potatoes, one plants sesame, another plants sweet potatoes seedlings, and two of them plant pumpkin.

My responsibility is to help them to solve the technical problems they meet in the process of their planting.

Of course, I am not an all-rounder, but I know many channels to get information from.

I am not sure what you mean by 'all-rounder'.

I may not know thabout some specific issues, but I can ask other specialists for help or find the solution on the internet.

If there is any new benefiting farmers policy, I will let them know for the first time.

If there is any new policy benefiting farmers, I will be the first to let them know.

Of course, I will go to their place to meet them in person and go to their farmland to see the situation of their plantingcrops.

Its content is very rich, and includinges laws and regulations, market prices, operative technology, agricultural classrooms, a network book store and so onmongst other things.

Although I am an agricultural science and technology personrofessional, it's the first time I interacted with farmers in person, so I cherish this opportunity.

Saying 'science and technology person' is really general. It is better to specify your work position.

I hope through my joint efforts with the demonstration households, they really achieve the purpose of increasing agricultural production and farmers' income.

Who is 'they' referring to in this sentence?

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Wow! This was really great. I could tell from the way this has been written that you have quite some experience writing in English. This entry is really neat and I enjoyed reading it. I hope my corrections help you. Keep going!! :D

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Jack

April 2, 2022

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Of course, I am not an all-rounder, but I know many channels to get information from.

I’m not specialized in every respect.

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Jack

April 2, 2022

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If there is any new benefiting farmers policy, I will let them know for the first time.

If there is any new policy benefiting farmers, I will be the first to let them know.

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Jack

April 2, 2022

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I may not know thabout some specific issues, but I can ask other specialists for help or find the solution on the internet.

Know about some specific issues

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Jack

April 2, 2022

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Its content is very rich, and includinges laws and regulations, market prices, operative technology, agricultural classrooms, a network book store and so onmongst other things.

Amongst other things.

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Jack

April 2, 2022

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I hope through my joint efforts with the demonstration households, they really achieve the purpose of increasing agricultural production and farmers' income.

The demonstration households.

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Jack

April 2, 2022

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Thank you for your help. I really appreciate your corrections.

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Jack

April 2, 2022

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This morning, I will go to Mazhai township to see my agricultural science and technology demonstration households.

This work was launched by the National Agricultural Ministry and is implemented nationwide.

I will instruct seven farmers in total. Three of them plant sweet potatoes, one plants sesame, another plants sweet potatoes seedlings, and two of them plants pumpkin.

My responsibility is to help them solve the technical problems they meet in the process of their planting.

Of course, I am not specialized in every aspect, but I know many channels to get information from. I may not know about some specific issues, but I can ask other specialists for help or find the solution on the internet.

I have set up a WeChat group and will invite them in. If there is any new policy benefiting farmers, I will be the first to let them know.

If they have any difficulties planting, they can let me know in the group at anytime. Of course, I will go to their place to meet them in person and go to their farmland to see the situation of their crops.

I will teach them how to make the most of the China Agricultural Technology Extension App.

This app is very powerful. Its content is very rich, and includes laws and regulations, market prices, operative technology, agricultural classrooms, a network book store amongst other things.

Although I am an agricultural science and technology professional, it's the first time I interacted with farmers in person, so I cherish this opportunity.

I hope through my joint efforts with the demonstration households, can achieve the purpose of increasing agricultural production and farmers' income.

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pearly_cevhera

April 2, 2022

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The demonstration households.

Then you can say it this way: "I hope that through my joint efforts with the demonstration households the goal of increasing agricultural production and farmers' income will be achieved". Or "I hope that my efforts will aid the demonstration households in achieving their goal of increasing their agricultural production and the farmer's income".

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pearly_cevhera

April 2, 2022

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Thank you for your help. I really appreciate your corrections.

You are very welcome! :D

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pearly_cevhera

April 2, 2022

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Amongst other things.

I forgot the last 'and': "and a network book store"
Also, I wasn't sure what you mean by 'a network book store'. Do you mean, a network and a bookstore?

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April 2, 2022

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This morning, I will go to Mazhai township to see my agricultural science and technology demonstration households. This work was launched by the National Agricultural Ministry and is implemented nationwide. I will instruct seven farmers in total. Three of them plant sweet potatoes, one plants sesame, another plants sweet potatoes seedlings, and two of them plants pumpkin. My responsibility is to help them solve the technical problems they meet in the process of their planting. Of course, I am not specialized in every aspect, but I know many channels to get information from. I may not know about some specific issues, but I can ask other specialists for help or find the solution on the internet. I have set up a WeChat group and will invite them in. If there is any new policy benefiting farmers, I will be the first to let them know. If they have any difficulties planting, they can let me know in the group at anytime. Of course, I will go to their place to meet them in person and go to their farmland to see the situation of their crops. I will teach them how to make the most of the China Agricultural Technology Extension App. This app is very powerful. Its content is very rich, and includes laws and regulations, market prices, operative technology, agricultural classrooms, a network book store amongst other things. Although I am an agricultural science and technology professional, it's the first time I interacted with farmers in person, so I cherish this opportunity. I hope through my joint efforts with the demonstration households, can achieve the purpose of increasing agricultural production and farmers' income.

Awesome!! :))

Just remember:
one (he/she/it) -> plants
two (or more) (they) -> plant

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Jack

April 3, 2022

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I forgot the last 'and': "and a network book store" Also, I wasn't sure what you mean by 'a network book store'. Do you mean, a network and a bookstore?

That app has a column of “网络书屋” I translated it with a translation app and the app said “network books store”

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Jack

April 3, 2022

5

Thank you very much. You are very helpful.

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This morning, I will go to Mazhai township to see my agricultural science and technology demonstration households.


This work was launched by the National Agricultural Ministry and is implemented nationwide.


I will instruct seven farmers in total.


Three of them plant sweet potatoes, one of them plants sesame, one of them plants sweet potatoes seedlings, two of them plants pumpkin.


Three of them plant sweet potatoes, one of them plants sesame, one of them plants sweet potatoes seedlings, two of them plants pumpkin.

Three of them plant sweet potatoes, one plants sesame, another plants sweet potatoes seedlings, and two of them plant pumpkin.

My responsibility is to help them to solve the technical problems they meet in the process of their planting.


My responsibility is to help them to solve the technical problems they meet in the process of their planting.

Of course, I am not an all-rounder, but I know many channels to get information.


Of course, I am not an all-rounder, but I know many channels to get information from.

I am not sure what you mean by 'all-rounder'.

I may not know the specific issues, but I can ask other specialists for help or find the solution on the internet.


I may not know thabout some specific issues, but I can ask other specialists for help or find the solution on the internet.

I have set up a WeChat group and will invite them in.


If there is any new benefiting farmers policy, I will let them know for the first time.


If there is any new benefiting farmers policy, I will let them know for the first time.

If there is any new policy benefiting farmers, I will be the first to let them know.

If they have any difficulties planting, they can let me know in the group at anytime.


Of course, I will go to their place to meet them in person and go to their farmland to see the situation of their plantings.


Of course, I will go to their place to meet them in person and go to their farmland to see the situation of their plantingcrops.

I will teach them how to make the most of the China Agricultural Technology Extension App.


This app is very powerful.


Its content is very rich, including laws and regulations, market price, operative technology, agricultural classroom, network book store and so on.


Its content is very rich, and includinges laws and regulations, market prices, operative technology, agricultural classrooms, a network book store and so onmongst other things.

Although I am an agricultural science and technology person, it's the first time I interacted with farmers in person, so I cherish this opportunity.


Although I am an agricultural science and technology personrofessional, it's the first time I interacted with farmers in person, so I cherish this opportunity.

Saying 'science and technology person' is really general. It is better to specify your work position.

I hope through my joint efforts with the demonstration households, they really achieve the purpose of increasing agricultural production and farmers' income.


I hope through my joint efforts with the demonstration households, they really achieve the purpose of increasing agricultural production and farmers' income.

Who is 'they' referring to in this sentence?

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