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I still vaguely remember the first time I caught a cold when I was a child.

Maybe I was just five or six years old. One day I felt very uncomfortable. I felt tired, my throat was itchy and I didn't want to move. My parents told me I caught a cold.

That was the first time I knew of the term "cold". Although I didn't know what it really meant, I knew it was a kind of illness.

At that time, I didn't take any medicine, I just had a sound sleep. The next morning I felt I had sweated at night, and the symptoms were all gone by then. Just over a night.

When I grew up and had a cold, it often lasted about a week, no matter whether I took medicine or not. Taking some medicine could only reduce symptoms, but it could not reduce the duration.

As I got old, things got worse. At the beginning of every winter, I would have a cold, and it often lasted two or three weeks, sometimes even more.

At the beginning of the cold, I usually don't want to take medicine. I always believe medicine has side effects, but every time I have to take medicine a week after catching a cold because it won't be cured if I don't take medicine.

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I still vaguely remember the first time I caught a cold when I was a child.

Maybe I was just around five or six years old.

One day I felt very uncomfortable.

I felt tired, my throat was itchy and I didn't want to move.

My parents told me I caught a cold.

That was the first time I knewheard of the term "cold".

Although I didn't know what it really meant, I knew it was a kind of illness.

At that time, I didn't take any medicine, I just had a sound sleept.

The next morning I felcould tell that I had sweated atduring the night, and the symptoms were all gone by then.

Just over aThey went away after one night.

When I grew upan adult and had a cold, it often lasted about a week, no matterregardless of whether I took medicine or not.

Taking some medicine cwould only reduce the symptoms, but it cwould not reduce the duration.

As I got older, things got worse.

At the beginning of every winter, I would have a cold, and it often lasted two or three weeks, sometimes even more.

At the beginningonset of thea cold, I usually don't want to take medicine.

I always believe medicine has side effects, but every time II always end up haveing to take medicine a week after catching a cold because it won't be cured if I don't take medicine.

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Jack

March 31, 2022

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Maybe I was just around five or six years old.

I was just around

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Jack

March 31, 2022

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That was the first time I knewheard of the term "cold".

That was the first time I heard of

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Jack

March 31, 2022

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The next morning I felcould tell that I had sweated atduring the night, and the symptoms were all gone by then.

I could tell that I had sweated during the night

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Jack

March 31, 2022

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Just over aThey went away after one night.

They went away after one night

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I still vaguely remember the first time I caught a cold when I was a child.


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Maybe I was just five or six years old.


Maybe I was just around five or six years old.

One day I felt very uncomfortable.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I felt tired, my throat was itchy and I didn't want to move.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My parents told me I caught a cold.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That was the first time I knew of the term "cold".


That was the first time I knewheard of the term "cold".

Although I didn't know what it really meant, I knew it was a kind of illness.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At that time, I didn't take any medicine, I just had a sound sleep.


At that time, I didn't take any medicine, I just had a sound sleept.

The next morning I felt I had sweated at night, and the symptoms were all gone by then.


The next morning I felcould tell that I had sweated atduring the night, and the symptoms were all gone by then.

Just over a night.


Just over aThey went away after one night.

When I grew up and had a cold, it often lasted about a week, no matter whether I took medicine or not.


When I grew upan adult and had a cold, it often lasted about a week, no matterregardless of whether I took medicine or not.

Taking some medicine could only reduce symptoms, but it could not reduce the duration.


Taking some medicine cwould only reduce the symptoms, but it cwould not reduce the duration.

As I got old, things got worse.


As I got older, things got worse.

At the beginning of every winter, I would have a cold, and it often lasted two or three weeks, sometimes even more.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At the beginning of the cold, I usually don't want to take medicine.


At the beginningonset of thea cold, I usually don't want to take medicine.

I always believe medicine has side effects, but every time I have to take medicine a week after catching a cold because it won't be cured if I don't take medicine.


I always believe medicine has side effects, but every time II always end up haveing to take medicine a week after catching a cold because it won't be cured if I don't take medicine.

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