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Jack

March 20, 2022

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When I was little, it snowed a lot and the heavy snow would cover my shank. We children often made snowmen, had snowball fights and scrawled on the snow.
I still remember that after snowing a whole night, you could see trees breaking because of the weight of the snow. (I will send you some pictures of it).
I checked that KL is ranked as the first tier city in the world, above Shenzhen and Guangzhou in China. It's amazing that all the capitals of southeast island countries performed well among Asia in that ranking list. I didn't expect that before.
Yes, the scent of air mixed with grass and soil after a rain is very fresh. I also like the smell. Yeah, it wakes me up.
Two corns? It's so vivid! Have you ever been inside that building?
I vow that I won't learn a second language anymore because only one English is enough to drive me crazy, and my brain is almost broken.
Please don't forget to let me know if you are visiting Anhui Province. I will drive you around.

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When I was little, it would snowed a lot and the heavy snow would cover my shanck.

A shank is what you use to stab someone in prison.

We children often made snowmen, had snowball fights and scrawled owrote in the snow.

I think that's what you mean.

I still remember that after it snowing aed the whole night, you could see trees breaking because of the weight of the snow.

(I will send you some pictures of it).

I didn't expect that before. / I wasn't expecting that.

I also like the smell.

Yeah, it wmakes me upfeel awake.

Two corns?

From further sentences I assume you're talking about buildings/parking garages resembling cobs of corn?

It's so vivid!

If you're talking about buildings, maybe “It looks cool/awesome/impressive" would be better. I haven't seen the pictures so I don't know.

Have you ever been inside that building?

I vow that I won't learn a second language anymore because only one English alone is enough to drive me crazy, and my brain is almost broken.

Please don't forget to let me know if you are visiting Anhui Province.

I will drive you around.

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Jack

March 27, 2022

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Thank you very much

When I was little, it snowed a lot and the heavy snow would cover my shankhouse.

I'm not sure what you mean by your shank

We children often made snowmen, had snowball fights and scrawled omade figures in the snow.

I still remember that after snowing a whole night, you could see trees breaking because of the weight of the snow.

I checked that KL is ranked as the first tier city in the world, above Shenzhen and Guangzhou in China.

It's amazing that all the capitals of southeast island countries performed well among Asia in that ranking list.

I didn't expect that before.

Yes, the scent of air mixed with grass and soil after a rain is very fresh.

I also like the smell.

Yeah, it wakes me up.

Two corns?

It's so vivid!

Have you ever been inside that building?

I vow that I won't learn a secondnymore language anymores because only one English is enough toEnglish alone is driveing me crazy, and my brain is almost brokencannot take much more.

Please don't forget to let me know if you are visiting Anhui Province.

I will drive you around.

Jack's avatar
Jack

March 20, 2022

1

When I was little, it snowed a lot and the heavy snow would cover my shankhouse.

The snow will be as high as as my shank.

Jack's avatar
Jack

March 20, 2022

1

Thank you very much.

It's so vivid!


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It's so vivid!

If you're talking about buildings, maybe “It looks cool/awesome/impressive" would be better. I haven't seen the pictures so I don't know.

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When I was little, it snowed a lot and the heavy snow would cover my shank.


When I was little, it snowed a lot and the heavy snow would cover my shankhouse.

I'm not sure what you mean by your shank

When I was little, it would snowed a lot and the heavy snow would cover my shanck.

A shank is what you use to stab someone in prison.

We children often made snowmen, had snowball fights and scrawled on the snow.


We children often made snowmen, had snowball fights and scrawled omade figures in the snow.

We children often made snowmen, had snowball fights and scrawled owrote in the snow.

I think that's what you mean.

I still remember that after snowing a whole night, you could see trees breaking because of the weight of the snow.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I still remember that after it snowing aed the whole night, you could see trees breaking because of the weight of the snow.

(I will send you some pictures of it).


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I checked that KL is ranked as the first tier city in the world, above Shenzhen and Guangzhou in China.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's amazing that all the capitals of southeast island countries performed well among Asia in that ranking list.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I didn't expect that before.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I didn't expect that before. / I wasn't expecting that.

Yes, the scent of air mixed with grass and soil after a rain is very fresh.


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I also like the smell.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Yeah, it wakes me up.


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Yeah, it wmakes me upfeel awake.

Two corns?


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Two corns?

From further sentences I assume you're talking about buildings/parking garages resembling cobs of corn?

Have you ever been inside that building?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I vow that I won't learn a second language anymore because only one English is enough to drive me crazy, and my brain is almost broken.


I vow that I won't learn a secondnymore language anymores because only one English is enough toEnglish alone is driveing me crazy, and my brain is almost brokencannot take much more.

I vow that I won't learn a second language anymore because only one English alone is enough to drive me crazy, and my brain is almost broken.

Please don't forget to let me know if you are visiting Anhui Province.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I will drive you around.


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