March 17, 2022
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One day I saw in my QQ friend's moments a cherry tree was blossoming.
I suddenly realized oh, it was already spring for a time, but I hadn't seen a real cherry tree blossoming this spring because on my way to work, there was no one of the trees.
This makes me think of the past while I lived near the south bus station, although I have sold that apartment.
Around that place, there were no parks or green areas, but just opposite my apartment, on the other side of Yingnan road was the residential community of staff working in Fuyang power bureau.
The environment inside the community was really nice. Many various trees and flowers were well managed and I often took a walk there to enjoy the beautiful scenery.
I remember taking some photos there. Let me check and share it with you guys.
I suddenly realized oh, it was already spring for a time, but I hadn't seen a real cherry tree blossoming this spring because on my way to work, there wasare no one of the treestrees like that.
March 18, 2022
Thank you very much.
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One day I saw in my QQ friend's moments a cherry tree was blossoming.
I suddenly realized oh, it wa's already been spring for a time, but I hadven't seen a real cherry tree blossoming this spring because on my way to work, there was no are none of the trees.
Tricky tenses in this sentance.
This makes me think of the past whilen I lived near the south bus station, although I have sold that apartment.
Around that place, there were no parks or green areas, but just opposite my apartment, on the other side of Yingnan road was the residential community of staff working in Fuyang power bureau.
The environment inside the community was really nice.
Many variouseties of trees and flowers were well managed and I often took a walk there to enjoy the beautiful scenery.
You could also say "many trees" or "various trees"
I remember taking some photos there.
Let me check and share it with you guys.
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There's a public garden near me with all different types of plants too, it's really interesting to visit.
March 18, 2022
I suddenly realized oh, it wa's already been spring for a time, but I hadven't seen a real cherry tree blossoming this spring because on my way to work, there was no are none of the trees.
Tricky tense? How tricky?
March 18, 2022
Lucky you, enjoy the park. Thank you very much.
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One day I saw in my QQ friend's moments athat the cherry tree wass are blossoming.
I changed this because all of the trees are starting to blossom, not just one, even if there was only one tree in the photo you saw.
I suddenly realized oh, it was already spring for a timethat spring has already started, but I hadn't seen a real cherry tree blossoming yet this spring because along my wayroute to work, there wasare no one of thecherry trees.
This makes me think of the past while, back when I lived near the south bus station, although I have sold that apartment.
Around that place, there were no parks or green areas, but just opposite my apartment, on the other side of Yingnan rRoad was the residential community of staff working in at the Fuyang power bureau.
The environment inside the community was really nice.
Many varioustypes of trees and flowers were well managed, and I often took a walks there to enjoy the beautiful scenery.
I remember taking some photos there.
Let me check and share ithem with you guys.
March 18, 2022
One day I saw in my QQ friend's moments athat the cherry tree wass are blossoming.
Are? Why?
March 18, 2022
When I talk about things that happened in the past, I often get confused about choosing verb tenses. When I use present simple tense, sometimes native English speakers correct it to past tense, but sometimes it is totally opposite. Could you please tell me more about the rules for choosing tenses in writing stories happening in the past? Thank you very much.
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One day I saw in my QQ friend's moments a cherry tree was blossoming. One day I saw in my QQ friend's moments I changed this because all of the trees are starting to blossom, not just one, even if there was only one tree in the photo you saw. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This makes me think of the past while I lived near the south bus station, although I have sold that apartment. This makes me think of the past This makes me think of the past wh |
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Around that place, there were no parks or green areas, but just opposite my apartment, on the other side of Yingnan road was the residential community of staff working in Fuyang power bureau. Around that place, there were no parks or green areas, but just opposite my apartment This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The environment inside the community was really nice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Many various trees and flowers were well managed and I often took a walk there to enjoy the beautiful scenery. Many Many vari You could also say "many trees" or "various trees" |
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