March 17, 2022
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Although decades have passed, I still remember my first workplace.
It was in another county named Jiashan in the east central part of Anhui province.
It was built on a small hill, and just had two bungalows. A row of small bungalows was built in the east-west direction, and another row of tall bungalows was built in the east in the south-north direction.
The small bungalow was our office and the other one was the dormitory for our students (my department is responsible for training agricultural machinery operators).
There was a small road that went from northwest to southeast in front of our office. In the southwest of our office, there was a large cedar wood.
Other colleagues had their own house, but three of us didn't, so there people lived in the office: one of my colleagues assigned to this department with me in the same year, and another colleague who was our leader. (His family was in another neighboring county).
It's been decades since I transferred to my home city, so I don't know if my first workplace still exists. Anyway, it exists in my heart forever.
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Although decades have passed, I still remember my first workplace.
It was in another county named Jiashan in the east central part of Anhui province.
It was built on a small hill, and had just had two bungalows.
A row of small bungalows was built in the east-west direction, and another row of tall bungalows was built in the east in the south-nornorth-south direction.
Could just be me being terrible at directions but I don't quite get what you mean by 'east-west' and 'north-south', since those directions are facing opposite each other.
Do you mean the row went from east to west? In that case it would be clearer to say "A row of small bungalows ran from east to west, and another row of tall bungalows ran from north to south."
The small bungalow was our office and the other one was the dormitory for our students (my department iwas responsible for training agricultural machinery operators).
There was a small road that went from northwest to southeast in front of our office.
In the southwest of our office, there was a large cedar wood.
Do you mean like a forest? Then it would be clearer to say "a large wood of cedar trees". :)
Other colleagues had their own houses, but three of us didn't, so there peoplwe lived in the office: me, one of my colleagues who was assigned to this department with me in the same year, and another colleague who was our leader.
(His family was in another neighboring county).
It's been decades since I transferred to my home city, so I don't know if my first workplace still exists.
Anyway, it exists in my heart forever.
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Good job, it sounds like a lovely place :)
March 18, 2022
In the southwest of our office, there was a large cedar wood.
“A large wood of cedar trees”, thank you very much.
March 18, 2022
A row of small bungalows was built in the east-west direction, and another row of tall bungalows was built in the east in the south-nornorth-south direction.
“Ran from east to west”, thank you very much
March 18, 2022
Thank you very much.
March 18, 2022
Thank you very much. Yes, it is.
March 19, 2022
No worries, glad it helped :)
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It was in another county named Jiashan in the east central part of Anhui province. It was in a |
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It was built on a small hill, and just had two bungalows. It was built on a small hill, and had just |
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A row of small bungalows was built in the east-west direction, and another row of tall bungalows was built in the east in the south-north direction. A row of small bungalows was built in the east-west direction, and another row of tall bungalows was built in the Could just be me being terrible at directions but I don't quite get what you mean by 'east-west' and 'north-south', since those directions are facing opposite each other. Do you mean the row went from east to west? In that case it would be clearer to say "A row of small bungalows ran from east to west, and another row of tall bungalows ran from north to south." |
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The small bungalow was our office and the other one was the dormitory for our students (my department is responsible for training agricultural machinery operators). The small bungalow was our office and the other one was the dormitory for our students (my department |
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There was a small road that went from northwest to southeast in front of our office. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the southwest of our office, there was a large cedar wood. In the southwest of our office, there was a large cedar wood. Do you mean like a forest? Then it would be clearer to say "a large wood of cedar trees". :) |
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Other colleagues had their own house, but three of us didn't, so there people lived in the office: one of my colleagues assigned to this department with me in the same year, and another colleague who was our leader. Other colleagues had their own houses, but three of us didn't, so there |
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(His family was in another neighboring county). This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's been decades since I transferred to my home city, so I don't know if my first workplace still exists. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Anyway, it exists in my heart forever. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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