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March 7, 2022

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It's spring now where I live. Why do people love spring? I think there are the following reasons: first of all, the weather gets warm, people don't need to wear bloated winter clothes, so they can act easily. Secondly, spring means life because everything starts growing in spring. Thirdly, people can see all kinds of green leaves and colorful flowers in spring. Fourthly, spring is a season full of energy—all the lives are energetic in spring.
Spring refers to hope, and all the beautiful things.

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It's spring now where I live.

Whyat do people loveike about spring?

Original also ok.

I think there areit's for the following reasons: f. First of all, the weather gets warm, so people don't need to wear bloatedthick winter clothes, so they can act easily anymore, and can feel more free.

Secondly, spring means life because everythingplants starts growing in spring.

Thirdly, pPeople can see all kinds of green leaves and colorful flowers in spring.

"Thirdly" feels a bit like a forced essay word, I don't recall ever hearing anyone use it naturally. This reason also ties into the previous one IMO.

Fourthly,And spring is a season full of energy—all the lives aing things are more energetic in spring.

Spring refers tois associated with hope, and all the beautiful things.

or represents.

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Rejuvenation, rebirth, everything's blooming

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Jack

March 10, 2022

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Thank you very much

I think there are the followur maing reasons: fFirst of all, the weather gets warmer, people don't need to wear bloated winter clothes, so and they can act easily.

Spring refers topresents hope, and all the beautiful things.

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Jack

March 8, 2022

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Thank you very much.

I think there areit's because of the following reasons: first of all, the weather gets warm, people don't need to wear bloatedcozy winter clothes, so they can act easimove freely.

Secondly, spring means life because everything starts growingflowers blossom in spring.

ThirdlyAlso, people can see all kinds of green leaves and colorful flowers in spring.

Fourthly, spring is a season full of energy—all the lives are energetic in spring.

Spring refers to hope, and all the beautiful things.

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Jack

March 7, 2022

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Thank you very much.

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It's spring now where I live.


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Why do people love spring?


Whyat do people loveike about spring?

Original also ok.

I think there are the following reasons: first of all, the weather gets warm, people don't need to wear bloated winter clothes, so they can act easily.


I think there areit's because of the following reasons: first of all, the weather gets warm, people don't need to wear bloatedcozy winter clothes, so they can act easimove freely.

I think there are the followur maing reasons: fFirst of all, the weather gets warmer, people don't need to wear bloated winter clothes, so and they can act easily.

I think there areit's for the following reasons: f. First of all, the weather gets warm, so people don't need to wear bloatedthick winter clothes, so they can act easily anymore, and can feel more free.

Secondly, spring means life because everything starts growing in spring.


Secondly, spring means life because everything starts growingflowers blossom in spring.

Secondly, spring means life because everythingplants starts growing in spring.

Thirdly, people can see all kinds of green leaves and colorful flowers in spring.


ThirdlyAlso, people can see all kinds of green leaves and colorful flowers in spring.

Thirdly, pPeople can see all kinds of green leaves and colorful flowers in spring.

"Thirdly" feels a bit like a forced essay word, I don't recall ever hearing anyone use it naturally. This reason also ties into the previous one IMO.

Fourthly, spring is a season full of energy—all the lives are energetic in spring.


Fourthly, spring is a season full of energy—all the lives are energetic in spring.

Fourthly,And spring is a season full of energy—all the lives aing things are more energetic in spring.

Spring refers to hope, and all the beautiful things.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Spring refers topresents hope, and all the beautiful things.

Spring refers tois associated with hope, and all the beautiful things.

or represents.

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