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Jack

Feb. 22, 2022

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Hello, Chen Jie. Thank you for giving me an English class. I think I'm still not used to this way of teaching in person, because I feel very nervous and embarrassed. I still want to take my original online class. In which I think my pressure will be less because I know the teachers are far away from me. Anyway, I'm very sorry that I can't let you continue to teach me. I hope you progress in your studies, health and happiness, and a bright future. Thank you.

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Hello, Chen Jie.

Thank you for giving me an English class.

I think I'm still not used to this way of tleachrning in person, because I feel very nervous and embarrassed.

This way makes it clear that you weren’t the teacher, though the way you had it is also correct.

I still want to take my original online class.

In which I think mythe pressure will be less that way because I know the teachers are far away from me.

“In which” would need to be after a comma rather than a full stop. Also we say “the pressure” rather than “my pressure,” I think because it’s the pressure of the situation rather than something that comes from you.

Anyway, I'm very sorry that I can't let you continue to teach me.

I hope you progress in your studies, and wish you health and, happiness, and a bright future.

“I hope you health and happiness” would be wrong, so we have to tweak the sentence a bit.

Thank you.

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Jack

Feb. 23, 2022

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Thank you very much.

I still want to take my original online class, in which I think the pressure will be less because I know the teachers are far away from me.

This sentence needs to be connected with the next one, because "in which" is a preposition.

I hope you progress in your studies, have good health and happiness, and a bright future.

The verb "progress" only makes sense for the teacher's studies. For the rest, you can just say that you hope the teacher has good health and happiness, and a bright future.

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Great letter, it was very kind!

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Jack

Feb. 23, 2022

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Thank you very much.

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Hello, Chen Jie.


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Thank you for giving me an English class.


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I think I'm still not used to this way of teaching in person, because I feel very nervous and embarrassed.


I think I'm still not used to this way of tleachrning in person, because I feel very nervous and embarrassed.

This way makes it clear that you weren’t the teacher, though the way you had it is also correct.

I still want to take my original online class.


I still want to take my original online class, in which I think the pressure will be less because I know the teachers are far away from me.

This sentence needs to be connected with the next one, because "in which" is a preposition.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In which I think my pressure will be less because I know the teachers are far away from me.


In which I think mythe pressure will be less that way because I know the teachers are far away from me.

“In which” would need to be after a comma rather than a full stop. Also we say “the pressure” rather than “my pressure,” I think because it’s the pressure of the situation rather than something that comes from you.

Anyway, I'm very sorry that I can't let you continue to teach me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope you progress in your studies, health and happiness, and a bright future.


I hope you progress in your studies, have good health and happiness, and a bright future.

The verb "progress" only makes sense for the teacher's studies. For the rest, you can just say that you hope the teacher has good health and happiness, and a bright future.

I hope you progress in your studies, and wish you health and, happiness, and a bright future.

“I hope you health and happiness” would be wrong, so we have to tweak the sentence a bit.

Thank you.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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