Feb. 22, 2022
Hello, Chen Jie. Thank you for giving me an English class. I think I'm still not used to this way of teaching in person, because I feel very nervous and embarrassed. I still want to take my original online class. In which I think my pressure will be less because I know the teachers are far away from me. Anyway, I'm very sorry that I can't let you continue to teach me. I hope you progress in your studies, health and happiness, and a bright future. Thank you.
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Hello, Chen Jie.
Thank you for giving me an English class.
I think I'm still not used to this way of tleachrning in person, because I feel very nervous and embarrassed.
This way makes it clear that you weren’t the teacher, though the way you had it is also correct.
I still want to take my original online class.
In which I think mythe pressure will be less that way because I know the teachers are far away from me.
“In which” would need to be after a comma rather than a full stop. Also we say “the pressure” rather than “my pressure,” I think because it’s the pressure of the situation rather than something that comes from you.
Anyway, I'm very sorry that I can't let you continue to teach me.
I hope you progress in your studies, and wish you health and, happiness, and a bright future.
“I hope you health and happiness” would be wrong, so we have to tweak the sentence a bit.
Thank you.
I still want to take my original online class, in which I think the pressure will be less because I know the teachers are far away from me.
This sentence needs to be connected with the next one, because "in which" is a preposition.
I hope you progress in your studies, have good health and happiness, and a bright future.
The verb "progress" only makes sense for the teacher's studies. For the rest, you can just say that you hope the teacher has good health and happiness, and a bright future.
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Hello, Chen Jie. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Thank you for giving me an English class. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I think I'm still not used to this way of teaching in person, because I feel very nervous and embarrassed. I think I'm still not used to this way of This way makes it clear that you weren’t the teacher, though the way you had it is also correct. |
I still want to take my original online class. I still want to take my original online class, in which I think the pressure will be less because I know the teachers are far away from me. This sentence needs to be connected with the next one, because "in which" is a preposition. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
In which I think my pressure will be less because I know the teachers are far away from me.
“In which” would need to be after a comma rather than a full stop. Also we say “the pressure” rather than “my pressure,” I think because it’s the pressure of the situation rather than something that comes from you. |
Anyway, I'm very sorry that I can't let you continue to teach me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I hope you progress in your studies, health and happiness, and a bright future. I hope you progress in your studies, have good health and happiness, and a bright future. The verb "progress" only makes sense for the teacher's studies. For the rest, you can just say that you hope the teacher has good health and happiness, and a bright future. I hope you progress in your studies, and wish you health “I hope you health and happiness” would be wrong, so we have to tweak the sentence a bit. |
Thank you. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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