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Feb. 12, 2022

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About Friends

I don't have many "friends". In fact, the item "friends" for me are just acquaintances.

We all have classmates and colleagues. I don't know if they can be considered friends.

I don't think I need friends because I don't know what friends are for.
I have things to do. I have my family, I have my relatives.

I have my independent thoughts, I can recognize things that are wrong or not, and I can make decisions about everything for me.

As long as I work hard, I have been making money, I can support my life and my family.

If I am in a bad situation unexpectedly, I believe my family and relatives can help me. It is not those who are so called "friends".

I often see those who are so-called friends hanging out, eating and drinking together. I don't know what that is for.

Not having many friends saves a lot of time for me, so I can do many meaningful things.

However, everyone has their own opinions on "friends". I don't want to put my points on others. Instead, I hope they enjoy their friendship.

My point about "friends" may be wrong, I just can't change it.

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About Friends

I don't have many "friends".

If you use quotes 就是“所谓的‘朋友’”的意思

In fact, the itemso-called "friends," for me, are just acquaintances.

We all have classmates and colleagues.

I don't know if they can be considered friends.

I don't think I need friends, because I don't know what friends are for.

I have things to do.

I have my family, I have my relatives.

I have my independent thoughts, I can recognize things that arecan think for myself, I can tell right from wrong or not, and I can make decisions about everything for mefor myself.

As long as I work hard,; I have been making money, I can support my life and my family.

You'd have to change to "I make money... and I can support my..." if you want to keep the comma,要不然听起来”我只要努力工作,就一直赚了钱...”

If I amfind myself in a bad situation unexpectedly, I believe, I know my family and relatives canwill help me.

"I believe" implies a guess or an uncertainty

It is not those who are so -called "friends".

Combine with previous sentence, "... will help me, not those ..."

I often see those who are so-called friends hanging out, eating and drinking together.

I don't know what that isey do that for.

Not hHaving manyfew friends saves me a lot of time for me, so, in which I can do many meaningful things.

However, everyone has their own opinions on "friends".

I don't want to put my pointimpose my views on others.

Instead, I hope they enjoy their friendship.

My point about "friends" may be wrong, but I just can't change it.

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Nice work!

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Jack

Feb. 19, 2022

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Thank you very much.

In fact, the itemse "friends" for me are just acquaintances.

I have my independent thoughts, I can recognize things that are wrong or notright or wrong, and I can make decisions about everything for me.

right or wrong
right or not
yes or no
good or bad, good and bad
happy and sad
Did you buy it or not?

We use the positive word first in such phrases

If I am in a bad situation unexpectedly, I believe my family and relatives can help me.

(or) ...will help me.
More positive verb.

I don't want to putforce my points on others.

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Jack

Feb. 13, 2022

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Thank you very much.

In fact, the itemmost "friends" for me are just acquaintances.

I have my independent thoughts, I can recognize things that are wrong or notright or wrong, and I can make decisions about everything for mefor myself.

As long as I work hard, I have beenwill makinge money, I and can support my lifeself and my family.

If I am in a bad situation unexpectedly, I believe my family and relatives canwould help me.,

It is not those who arerather than any so -called "friends".

I don't want to put my points on othersclaim that my position is the only right way.

Instead, I hope they enjoy their friendships.

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Very well written! It's hard to maintain friendships outside of school. Personally I have always felt more comfortable having fewer friends, but stronger relationships, than trying to keep up with a lot of people at the same time.

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Jack

Feb. 12, 2022

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Thank you very much.

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I don't have many "friends".


I don't have many "friends".

If you use quotes 就是“所谓的‘朋友’”的意思

In fact, the item "friends" for me are just acquaintances.


In fact, the itemmost "friends" for me are just acquaintances.

In fact, the itemse "friends" for me are just acquaintances.

In fact, the itemso-called "friends," for me, are just acquaintances.

We all have classmates and colleagues.


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I don't know if they can be considered friends.


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I don't think I need friends because I don't know what friends are for.


I don't think I need friends, because I don't know what friends are for.

I have things to do.


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I have my family, I have my relatives.


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I have my independent thoughts, I can recognize things that are wrong or not, and I can make decisions about everything for me.


I have my independent thoughts, I can recognize things that are wrong or notright or wrong, and I can make decisions about everything for mefor myself.

I have my independent thoughts, I can recognize things that are wrong or notright or wrong, and I can make decisions about everything for me.

right or wrong right or not yes or no good or bad, good and bad happy and sad Did you buy it or not? We use the positive word first in such phrases

I have my independent thoughts, I can recognize things that arecan think for myself, I can tell right from wrong or not, and I can make decisions about everything for mefor myself.

As long as I work hard, I have been making money, I can support my life and my family.


As long as I work hard, I have beenwill makinge money, I and can support my lifeself and my family.

As long as I work hard,; I have been making money, I can support my life and my family.

You'd have to change to "I make money... and I can support my..." if you want to keep the comma,要不然听起来”我只要努力工作,就一直赚了钱...”

If I am in a bad situation unexpectedly, I believe my family and relatives can help me.


If I am in a bad situation unexpectedly, I believe my family and relatives canwould help me.,

If I am in a bad situation unexpectedly, I believe my family and relatives can help me.

(or) ...will help me. More positive verb.

If I amfind myself in a bad situation unexpectedly, I believe, I know my family and relatives canwill help me.

"I believe" implies a guess or an uncertainty

It is not those who are so called "friends".


It is not those who arerather than any so -called "friends".

It is not those who are so -called "friends".

Combine with previous sentence, "... will help me, not those ..."

I often see those who are so-called friends hanging out, eating and drinking together.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don't know what that is for.


I don't know what that isey do that for.

Not having many friends saves a lot of time for me, so I can do many meaningful things.


Not hHaving manyfew friends saves me a lot of time for me, so, in which I can do many meaningful things.

However, everyone has their own opinions on "friends".


However, everyone has their own opinions on "friends".

I don't want to put my points on others.


I don't want to put my points on othersclaim that my position is the only right way.

I don't want to putforce my points on others.

I don't want to put my pointimpose my views on others.

Instead, I hope they enjoy their friendship.


Instead, I hope they enjoy their friendships.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My point about "friends" may be wrong, I just can't change it.


My point about "friends" may be wrong, but I just can't change it.

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