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artemislang

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Journal : 3 Aug

This morning I woke up at 9 o’clock. After having my breakfast with coffee and brioches, I washed my teeth and face as usual.
Then I started my morning routine by doing some physical exercises and meditation. These activities give me a boost of energy I need to face the adversities of the day.
After that, I studied for about two hours for my japanese literature exam till lunch time.
That is all for now.

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After having my breakfast with coffee and brioches, I wabrushed my teeth and washed my face as usual.

Brioche is non-countable like "bread."

After that, I studied for about two hours for my jJapanese literature exam till lunch time.

"Till" is correct but informal which is fine in this case.

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artemislang

Aug. 4, 2020

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After having my breakfast with coffee and brioches, I wabrushed my teeth and washed my face as usual.

I had that doubt and you solved it. Thanks a lot!

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artemislang

Aug. 4, 2020

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After that, I studied for about two hours for my jJapanese literature exam till lunch time.

Thanks again also for this piece of information!

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Journal : 3 Aug

This morning I woke up at 9 o’clock.

After having my breakfast with coffee and brioches, I wabrushed my teeth and washed my face as usual.

These activities give me athe boost of energy I need to face the adversities of the day.

After that, I studied for about two hours for my jJapanese literature exam for about two hours, untill lunch time.

With capitalization yours is correct, but this order feels more natural to me.

That is all for now.

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artemislang

Aug. 4, 2020

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After that, I studied for about two hours for my jJapanese literature exam for about two hours, untill lunch time.

Yeah, this sentence sounds way better! Thanks!

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Rob

Aug. 4, 2020

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Happy to help! 👍

Journal : 3: Aug 3

remember that in English we commonly write the month before the day.

This morning I woke up at 9 o’clock.

After having my breakfast with coffee and brioches, I wabrushed my teeth and washed my face as usual.

Then I started my morning routine by doing some physical exercises and meditation.

These activities give me athe boost of energy I need to face the adversities of the day.

After that, I studied for about two hours for my jJapanese literature exam untill lunch time.

That is all for now.

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Very good text, good job! :)

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artemislang

Aug. 4, 2020

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Thank you very much!

Journal : 3 Aug


Journal : 3: Aug 3

remember that in English we commonly write the month before the day.

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This morning I woke up at 9 o’clock.


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After having my breakfast with coffee and brioches, I washed my teeth and face as usual.


After having my breakfast with coffee and brioches, I wabrushed my teeth and washed my face as usual.

After having my breakfast with coffee and brioches, I wabrushed my teeth and washed my face as usual.

After having my breakfast with coffee and brioches, I wabrushed my teeth and washed my face as usual.

Brioche is non-countable like "bread."

Then I started my morning routine by doing some physical exercises and meditation.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

These activities give me a boost of energy I need to face the adversities of the day.


These activities give me athe boost of energy I need to face the adversities of the day.

These activities give me athe boost of energy I need to face the adversities of the day.

After that, I studied for about two hours for my japanese literature exam till lunch time.


After that, I studied for about two hours for my jJapanese literature exam untill lunch time.

After that, I studied for about two hours for my jJapanese literature exam for about two hours, untill lunch time.

With capitalization yours is correct, but this order feels more natural to me.

After that, I studied for about two hours for my jJapanese literature exam till lunch time.

"Till" is correct but informal which is fine in this case.

That is all for now.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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