Jan. 3, 2022
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Today I want to talk about my new apartment.
I bought it in 2018, when house prices were at their peak in my city.
When I bought it, the parking spaces were bundled. If you didn't want the parking spaces, you couldn't buy an apartment. I had to spend 300,000 RMB for just a single parking space.
The reason why the developer was so overbearing? It was because the residential community has a superior geographical location.
The community is in the southern new district of Fuyang city, the northeast area of Shuangqingwan Park. From the front balcony of the apartment, I can see the entire park.
It's said that our municipal government office will move to the northern side of the lake, and the building land has been reserved.
The eastern side of the park is connected with the Zhongqing River. The northern side of the park is connected with the Balisong River.
In the southeast corner of the park there is the Fuyang Science and Technology Museum. In the southwest corner of the park there is the Fuyang Grand Theatre. In the northeast of the park there is the Fuyang Museum. In the northwest of the park there is the Fuyang Library and the Fuyang Administrative Service Center. In the north of the park there is Fuyang Citizen Park. Besides, on the southern side and the western side of the park there are two large commercial streets possessed by the Huarun Real Estate and the Anhui Real Estate Group.
So Shuangqingwan block is considered as the future political, economic and cultural center of Fuyang city.
Today I took some decoration stuff to the apartment and after that I walked around the park.
The weather is so nice, sunny and warm. The natural environment here is quite good. It's a really good place to live, so I don't regret buying this apartment at a very expensive cost.
Journal
Today I want to talk about my new apartment.
I bought it in 2018, when house prices were at their peak in my city.
When I bought it, the parking spaces were bundled.
If you didn't want thea parking spaces, you couldn't buy an apartment.
The reason whyWhy was the developer was so overbearing?
The original sentence isn't wrong, but this is just another way to phrase this question.
It was because theis residential community has a superior geographical location.
The community is in the new southern new district of Fuyang city, in the northeast area of Shuangqingwan Park.
From the front balcony of the apartment, I can see the entire park.
It's said that our municipal government office will move to the northern side of the lake, and the land for the building land has been reserved.
The eastern side of the park is connected with the Zhongqing River.
The northern side of the park is connected with the Balisong River.
In the southeast corner of the park there is the Fuyang Science and Technology Museum.
In the southwest corner of the park there is the Fuyang Grand Theatre.
In the northeast of the park there is the Fuyang Museum.
In the northwest of the park there is the Fuyang Library and the Fuyang Administrative Service Center.
In the north of the park there is Fuyang Citizen Park.
BesidesAdditionally, on the southern side and the western side of the park there are two large commercial streets possessed by the Huarun Real Estate and the Anhui Real Estate Group.
So the Shuangqingwan block is considered as the future political, economic and cultural center of Fuyang city.
Today I took some decoration stuffs to the apartment and after that I walked around the park.
you could also say "decorative stuff"
The weather is so nice, sunny and warm.
The natural environment here is quite good.
It's a really good place to live, so I don't regret buying this apartment at a very expensive cost.
Jan. 8, 2022
Thank you very much. I really appreciate your corrections.
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Today I want to talk about my new apartment.
I bought it in 2018, when house prices were at their peak in my city.
When I bought it, the parking spaces were bundled.
If you didn't want the parking spaces, you couldn't buy an apartment.
I had to spend 300,000 RMB for just a single parking space.
The reason why the developer was so overbearing?
It was because the residential community has a superior geographical location.
The community is (located) in the new southern new district of Fuyang cCity, in the northeast area of Shuangqingwan Park.
From the front balcony of the apartment, I can see the entire park.
It' is said that the office of our municipal government office will be moved to the northern sidepart of the lake, and the building land has been reserved for construction.
or do you mean, the land where your building is has been reserved?
The eastern side of the park is connected withto the Zhongqing River.
The northern side of the park is connected withto the Balisong River.
In the southeast corner of the park there is the Fuyang Science and Technology Museum.
In the southwest corner of the park there is the Fuyang Grand Theatre.
In the northeast side of the park there is the Fuyang Museum.
In the northwest side of the park there is the Fuyang Library and the Fuyang Administrative Service Center.
In the northern part of the park is there is Fuyang Citizen Park.
BesidesAdditionally, on the southern side and the western sides of the park there are two large commercial streets possessowned by the Huarun Real Estate and the Anhui Real Estate Group.
SoThus, the Shuangqingwan block is considered as the future political, economic and cultural center of Fuyang cCity.
Today I tookbrought some decorationg stuff to the apartment and after that Ithen walked around the park.
The weather is so nice, sunny and warm.
The natural environment here is quite good.
It's a really good place to live, so I don't regret buying this apartment at a very expensive costprice.
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