Dec. 1, 2021
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I was born and raised in the countryside and went to elementary school at the age of six. I couldn't get a good grade at the very beginning when I first went to school, but gradually I did well in my courses and often got the highest scores in my school. Maybe in grade three, I was ill and had to postpone my studies for a few months. In grade five, I got ill again, and again, I postponed my studies for another few months. When I was in junior high school, I often had fevers and had to take some medicine. In short, I didn't have a strong body at that time. When I graduated from junior high school, I took the entrance examination for secondary school and got first place in my school. Back then, the passing rate of technical secondary school examinations was only 3% to 4%, and it meant you already got a job from the local government, and just needed to study in a technical secondary school for three years. You could also go to senior high school with your exam scores, but it meant that you canceled the opportunity to work in the local government because after three years of learning in senior high school, if you couldn't pass the university entrance exam, you still had to go to your village to be a farmer for your whole life. I finally chose to go to a technical secondary school because I didn't want to lose this precious opportunity to be a civil servant. Although my current living situation is not bad and I have already got an undergraduate degree via adult education, I still feel very sad about not having the chance to study in senior high school and university.
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I was born and raised in the countryside and went tostarted elementary school at the age of six.
I couldn't get a good grade at the very beginning when I first went to school, but gradually I did well in my courses and often got the highest scores in my school.
When I first started school, I did't get very good grades. But gradually I did well in my courses and often got the highest scores in my school.
Maybe iIn grade three, I was ill and had to postpone my studies for a few months.
When I was in junior high school, I often had fevers and had to take some medicine.
You could also go to senior high school with your exam scores, but it meant that you canceledlost the opportunity to work in the local government because after three years of learning in senior high school, if you couldn't pass the university entrance exam, you still had to go to your village to be a farmer for your whole life.
I finallyn the end, I chose to go to a technical secondary school because I didn't want to lose this precious opportunity to be a civil servant.
Although my current living situation is not bad and I have already got an undergraduate degree via adult education, I still feel very sad about not having had the chance to study in senior high school and university.
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Dec. 2, 2021
I was born and raised in the countryside and went tostarted elementary school at the age of six.
“Started” is more accurate. “Went to” doesn’t necessarily have the meaning of “started to study at school”
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I was born and raised in the countryside and went to elementary school at the age of six. I was born and raised in the countryside and |
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I couldn't get a good grade at the very beginning when I first went to school, but gradually I did well in my courses and often got the highest scores in my school. I couldn't get a good grade at the very beginning when I first went to school, but gradually I did well in my courses and often got the highest scores in my school. When I first started school, I did't get very good grades. But gradually I did well in my courses and often got the highest scores in my school. |
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Maybe in grade three, I was ill and had to postpone my studies for a few months.
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In grade five, I got ill again, and again, I postponed my studies for another few months. |
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When I was in junior high school, I often had fevers and had to take some medicine. When I was in junior high school, I often had fevers and had to take |
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In short, I didn't have a strong body at that time. |
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When I graduated from junior high school, I took the entrance examination for secondary school and got first place in my school. |
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Back then, the passing rate of technical secondary school examinations was only 3% to 4%, and it meant you already got a job from the local government, and just needed to study in a technical secondary school for three years. |
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You could also go to senior high school with your exam scores, but it meant that you canceled the opportunity to work in the local government because after three years of learning in senior high school, if you couldn't pass the university entrance exam, you still had to go to your village to be a farmer for your whole life. You could also go to senior high school with your exam scores, but it meant that you |
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I finally chose to go to a technical secondary school because I didn't want to lose this precious opportunity to be a civil servant. I |
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Although my current living situation is not bad and I have already got an undergraduate degree via adult education, I still feel very sad about not having the chance to study in senior high school and university. Although my current living situation is not bad and I have already got an undergraduate degree via adult education, I still feel very sad about not having had the chance to study in senior high school and university. |
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