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Jack

Dec. 1, 2021

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Time flies. Unconsciously, life has passed over a half. I often have many feelings about the first part of my life. Not obtaining a senior official position, not making a lot of money and I can't achieve that in the rest of my life. In short, I am just an ordinary person. But most people are just ordinary people. Being an ordinary person still makes me happy. There are still many meaningful things I want to do. I have to make good use of the time, no longer waste it. I still want to achieve some success in the rest of my life.

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Time flies.

Unconsciously, life has passed over a half.

I often haved many feelings about the first part of my life.

subj. v. agr.
'I' is singular but 'have' is plural.

Not obtaining a senior official position, not making a lot of money and. Those are the things that I can't achieve that in the rest of my life.

In short, I am just an ordinary person.

But most people are just ordinary people.

Being an ordinary person still makes me happy.

There are still many meaningful things I want to do.

I have to make good use of the time, no longer waste itt wasting it anymore.

I still want to achieve some success in the rest of my life.

Jack's avatar
Jack

Dec. 1, 2021

6

I often haved many feelings about the first part of my life.

Subject verb agreement. Thank you very much.

Jack's avatar
Jack

Dec. 1, 2021

6

Thank you very much for correcting me.

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Time flies.


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Unconsciously, life has passed over a half.


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I often have many feelings about the first part of my life.


I often haved many feelings about the first part of my life.

subj. v. agr. 'I' is singular but 'have' is plural.

Not obtaining a senior official position, not making a lot of money and I can't achieve that in the rest of my life.


Not obtaining a senior official position, not making a lot of money and. Those are the things that I can't achieve that in the rest of my life.

In short, I am just an ordinary person.


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But most people are just ordinary people.


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Being an ordinary person still makes me happy.


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There are still many meaningful things I want to do.


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I have to make good use of the time, no longer waste it.


I have to make good use of the time, no longer waste itt wasting it anymore.

I still want to achieve some success in the rest of my life.


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