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Jack

Dec. 1, 2021

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Reply to My Language Partner.

Generally speaking, I’d like to live in a city by the sea with mountains. I could go climbing or look out at the sea.
The blue skies and clouds have always been my favorite. They are so simple, yet so beautiful, and you don’t need to pay anything.
Yes, although pianos are nice, they can't bring the feeling that comes from plucking strings with your hands.
I also had a guitar when I was young, but I couldn't play it well. I’ve forgotten where I lost it.
I can imagine the photo you described: a clear lake, a quiet mountain forest, an elegant woman and a melodious 古筝, it paints a really beautiful scenery.

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The blue skies and clouds have always been my favorite.

Could also write "My favorite part is the blue skies and the clouds"

Yes, aAlthough pianos are nice, they can't bring the feeling that comes from plucking strings with your hands.

But I’ve forgotten where I lost it.

Sounds more natural with "but".

I can imagine the melodious photo you described: a clear lake, a quiet mountain forest, an elegant woman and a melodious 古筝, it paint. The painting has a really beautiful scenery.

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Jack

Dec. 21, 2021

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Thank you very much. I am very grateful.

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Generally speaking, I like to live in a seaside city with mountains.


I could go climbing or look out at the sea.


The blue skies and clouds have always been my favorite.


The blue skies and clouds have always been my favorite.

Could also write "My favorite part is the blue skies and the clouds"

They are so simple, yet so beautiful, and you never need to pay them anything.


Yes, although pianos are nice, they can't bring people the feeling of plunking strings with their hands.


I also had a guitar when I was young, but I couldn't play it well.


I already forgot where I lost it.


I can imagine the photo you described: a clear lake, a quiet mountain forest, an elegant woman and melodious 古筝, it’s really beautiful scenery.


Reply to My Language Partner.


Generally speaking, I’d like to live in a city by the sea with mountains.


They are so simple, yet so beautiful, and you don’t need to pay anything.


Yes, although pianos are nice, they can't bring the feeling that comes from plucking strings with your hands.


Yes, aAlthough pianos are nice, they can't bring the feeling that comes from plucking strings with your hands.

I’ve forgotten t where I lost it.


I can imagine the photo you described: a clear lake, a quiet mountain forest, an elegant woman and a melodious 古筝, it paints a really beautiful scenery.


I can imagine the melodious photo you described: a clear lake, a quiet mountain forest, an elegant woman and a melodious 古筝, it paint. The painting has a really beautiful scenery.

I’ve forgotten where I lost it.


But I’ve forgotten where I lost it.

Sounds more natural with "but".

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