Nov. 17, 2021
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I am very glad to hear that your parents are very healthy and I hope they have a long and healthy life, and happiness forever.
Our staple foods are mainly rice, steamed buns and noodles, and our non-staple foods are chicken, fish, meat, eggs, soy products and vegetables. We rarely eat bread, instead we only regard bread as pastry.
I have a bread machine. I made bread several times and I think it's done well. I also made pizzas with my oven several times and I think it's not bad.
I don't like eating spicy foods and I like eating light flavored foods. Less oil, less salt, less seasoning, no sugar and natural fresh ingredients are my pursuit of the food. I think this kind of diet is very beneficial to our health.
There shouldn't be regrets because you are in an English-speaking country where you have little chance to practice your Chinese, so your Chinese will gradually become worse.
No matter in any country, it's unrealistic to let the elderly live together with their children because the facts speak for themselves. In China, when the elderly can't take care of themselves, I think it is a better choice to live in a nursing home. China has many nursing homes run by the government or individual enterprises and the conditions of the nursing homes are really good. All you need to do is to pay them. There are dedicated staff responsible for cleaning, caring and cooking for the elderly. Nursing homes also often hold some interesting activities for the elderly.
Yesterday, some of my colleagues and I went to the countryside and I took some interesting videos and photos. I will share them with you later.
Journal
I am very glad to hear that your parents are very healthy, and I hope they have a long and healthy life, and filled with fore-everlasting happiness forever.
Our staple foods are mainly rice, steamed buns and noodles, and our non-staple foods are chicken, fish, meat, eggs, soy products and vegetables.
We rarely eat bread, instead we only and regard breadit as pastry.
I have a bread making machine.
I made bread several times and I think it's done turned out well.
made = past
turned out = past
Keep the tenses the same
I also made pizzas with my oven several times and I don't think it's no turned out bad.
I don't like eating spicy foods and I like eating light flavored foods.
I think this kind of diet is very beneficial to our health.
There shouldn't be regrets because you are in an English-speaking country where you have little chance to practice your Chinese, so your Chinese will gradually become worse.
In China, when the elderly can't take care of themselves, I think it is a better choice to live in a nursing home.
China has many nursing homes run by the government or individual enterprises, and the conditions of the nursing homes are really good.
All you need to do is to pay them.
There are dedicated staff responsible for cleaning, caring and cooking for the elderly.
Nursing homes also often hold some interesting activities for the elderly.
Yesterday, some of my colleagues and I went to the countryside and I took some interesting videos and photos.
I will share them with you later.
Feedback
I miss China and I hope to go back one day soon!
Nov. 17, 2021
Thank you very much. Sounds like you have been to China before?
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I am very glad to hear that your parents are very healthy and I hope they have a long and healthy life, and happiness forever. I am very glad to hear that your parents are very healthy, and I hope they have a long and healthy life |
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Our staple foods are mainly rice, steamed buns and noodles, and our non-staple foods are chicken, fish, meat, eggs, soy products and vegetables. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We rarely eat bread, instead we only regard bread as pastry. We rarely eat bread |
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I have a bread machine. I have a bread making machine. |
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I made bread several times and I think it's done well. I made bread several times and I think it made = past turned out = past Keep the tenses the same |
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I also made pizzas with my oven several times and I think it's not bad. I also made pizzas with my oven several times and I don't think it |
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I don't like eating spicy foods and I like eating light flavored foods. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Less oil, less salt, less seasoning, no sugar and natural fresh ingredients are my pursuit of the food. |
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I think this kind of diet is very beneficial to our health. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There shouldn't be regrets because you are in an English-speaking country where you have little chance to practice your Chinese, so your Chinese will gradually go down. |
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No matter in any country, it's unrealistic to let the elderly live together with their children because the facts speak for themselves. |
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In China, when the elderly can't take care of themselves, I think it is a better choice to live in a nursing home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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China has many nursing homes run by the government or individual enterprises and the conditions of the nursing homes are really good. China has many nursing homes run by the government or individual enterprises, and the conditions of the nursing homes are really good. |
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All you need to do is to pay them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are dedicated staff responsible for cleaning, caring and cooking for the elderly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Nursing homes also often hold some interesting activities for the elderly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yesterday, some of my colleagues and I went to the countryside and I took some interesting videos and photos. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I will share them with you later. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There shouldn't be regrets because you are in an English-speaking country where you have little chance to practice your Chinese, so your Chinese will gradually become worse. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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