Nov. 2, 2021
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I think so. What you were saying tomorrow means evening where I am. At that time, I already get off my work, so I think it was pretty okay. You are really talented. See you this evening (also tomorrow on your side.
One thing I need to apologize for is that 8:00 every night is when my regular lessons start, so we only have one hour's call, but it doesn't matter. If you want to settle the time down for a long term, I can postpone my lessons to 8:30 pm from the eleventh of this month so that we can have one and a half hour call. Please let me know what you think because I want to make everything very suitable for you.
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I think so.
What you were saying tomorrow means evening where I am.
At that time, I already get off my work, so I think it was pretty okay.
"my" is assumed. "My work" is also not wrong, but "get off work" is such a typical phrase that "get off my work" sounds funny.
You are really talented.
See you this evening (also tomorrow on your side.
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One thing I need to apologize for is that 8:00 every night is when my regular lessons start, so we only have one hour's call, but it doesn't matter. If you want to settle thepick a better time down for athe long term, I can postpone my lessons to 8:30 pm from the eleventh of this month so that we can have a one and a half hour call. Please let me know what you think because I want to make everything very suitable for you.
As a west coast American, I haven't heard of "settle the time down" as a phrase, so I replaced it with a phrase that I am more familiar with.
"a long term" -> "the long term", could also be "a longer term". "The long term" is a phrase that can be used to refer to the generic/unspecified future, while "a long term" means something like picking "a long term" from among a set of options.
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Again, absolutely readable and made total sense, which is tricky since the situation is complicated!
Nov. 4, 2021
Thank you very much.
It’s a long WeChat message about communicating with my language partner. We were discussing a suitable time for us to have voice calls with each other.
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I think so. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What you were saying tomorrow means evening where I am. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At that time, I already get off my work, so I think it was pretty okay. At that time, I already get off "my" is assumed. "My work" is also not wrong, but "get off work" is such a typical phrase that "get off my work" sounds funny. |
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You are really talented. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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See you this evening (also tomorrow on your side. One thing I need to apologize for is that 8:00 every night is when my regular lessons start, so we only have one hour's call, but it doesn't matter. If you want to settle the time down for a long term, I can postpone my lessons to 8:30 pm from the eleventh of this month so that we can have one and a half hour call. Please let me know what you think because I want to make everything very suitable for you. See you this evening (also tomorrow on your side. As a west coast American, I haven't heard of "settle the time down" as a phrase, so I replaced it with a phrase that I am more familiar with. "a long term" -> "the long term", could also be "a longer term". "The long term" is a phrase that can be used to refer to the generic/unspecified future, while "a long term" means something like picking "a long term" from among a set of options. |
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