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Jack

Oct. 26, 2021

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Yes, everything is fine for me now. Thank you for your concern.
The seasons in your place always seem to come early because the scenes in your photos only appear in the winter in my place. It's really annoying when the windshield is covered with a layer of frost because it is difficult to clean. I usually turn on warm air to melt it, but this process takes a long time. Your photos are very creative and bring nice enjoyment to people.
Before I read the poem you sent me, I knew of the poet Yeats, but I can't remember whether or not I had read his poems. The poet described a quiet and beautiful pastoral scene in the poem, which is something most people who have lived in cities for a long time crave for.
There were many famous pastoral poets in ancient China and Tao Yuanming is one of them. Let me share with you one of his famous poems.

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Yes, everything is fine for me now.

or " things are going well for me now"

T,thank you for your concern.

The seasons in your place always seem to come early because the scenes in your photos only appear in the winter in my placewhere I am.

It's really annoying when the windshield is covered with a layer of frost because it is difficult to clean.

I usually turn on warm air to melt it, but this process takes a long time.

Your photos are very creative and bring nice enjoyment to people.

or just "very creative and enjoyable"

Before I read the poem you sent me, I knew of/about the poet Yeats, but I can't remember whether or notif I had read his poems.

The poet described a quiet and beautiful pastoral scene in the poem, which is something most people who have lived in cities for a long time crave for.

There were many famous pastoral poets in ancient China and Tao Yuanming is one of them.

Let me share with you one of his famous poems with you.

just style differences

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Nice, I don't know much about poems but I'd love to learn more

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Jack

Oct. 27, 2021

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Thank you very much. Let me share that poem with you.

饮酒·结庐在人境
作者:陶渊明

结庐在人境,而无车马喧。
问君何能尔?心远地自偏。
采菊东篱下,悠然见南山。
山气日夕佳,飞鸟相与还。
此中有真意,欲辨已忘言。

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Yes, everything is fine for me now.


Yes, everything is fine for me now.

or " things are going well for me now"

Thank you for your concern.


T,thank you for your concern.

The seasons in your place always seem to come early because the scenes in your photos only appear in the winter in my place.


The seasons in your place always seem to come early because the scenes in your photos only appear in the winter in my placewhere I am.

It's really annoying when the windshield is covered with a layer of frost because it is difficult to clean.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I usually turn on warm air to melt it, but this process takes a long time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Your photos are very creative and bring nice enjoyment to people.


Your photos are very creative and bring nice enjoyment to people.

or just "very creative and enjoyable"

Before I read the poem you sent me, I knew of the poet Yeats, but I can't remember whether or not I had read his poems.


Before I read the poem you sent me, I knew of/about the poet Yeats, but I can't remember whether or notif I had read his poems.

The poet described a quiet and beautiful pastoral scene in the poem, which is something most people who have lived in cities for a long time crave for.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There were many famous pastoral poets in ancient China and Tao Yuanming is one of them.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Let me share with you one of his famous poems.


Let me share with you one of his famous poems with you.

just style differences

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