Nov. 16, 2023
I want to tell you about my family. I have mother, father and two younger sisters. My parents are doctors and my sisters are pupils. My parents met at the medical university when they studed. My mother is from province and my father from city. My parants and my younger sisters live at apartment in downtown.I live with my girlfriend in neighboring area at own apartment. One of sisters study at high school and another sister study at primary school. One of sisters, which study at high school, is going to become a doctor like our parents. Another sister is going to become an engineer, maybe architect. Sometimes, I have my famaly over to eat homemade food. My girlfriend cook so delicous and perfect meals. It usually happens at the weekend. I have very wonderful family and girlfriend. I confident I can rely on my family or girlfriend.
Thanks for reading my journal.
I have a mother, father, and two younger sisters.
My parents are doctors and my sisters are pupilstudents.
My parents met at the medical university when they studedwhile studying in medical school.
My mother is from the province and my father from the city.
I'm not sure what you mean by province... Do you perhaps mean from the countryside?
My paraents and my younger sisters live atin an apartment in downtown. I live in my own apartment with my girlfriend in a neighboring area at own apartment.
One of my sisters study atis in high school and anthe other sister study atis in primary school.
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Sometimes, I have my famaily over to eat homemade food.
My girlfriend cook sos perfect, delicious and perfect meals.
It usually happens atduring the weekend.
I have a very wonderful family and girlfriend.
I am confident I can rely on my family orand girlfriend.
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Journal #27: "How I'm learning English"
I want to tell you about my family.
I have a mother, father, and two younger sisters.
You can also say: I have a mother, a father, and two younger sisters.
My parents are doctors and my sisters are pupilstudents.
Pupils is overly formal and you won't really see people using it even in written language. A more common way to say it would be: My sisters are in school.
My parents met at the medical university when they studied there.
You might say instead: My parents met at the medical university where they studied.
It's a little different, but it has the same general meaning and sounds more natural.
My mother is from provincthe countryside and my father is from the city.
I'm sorry, I'm not sure what you mean by province here. It can change depending on the region. If you mean a rural area that is not from the city, you might say countryside to sound more natural.
My paraents and my younger sisters live atin an apartment in downtown. I live with my girlfriend in a neighboring area at my own apartment.
One of my sisters studyies at high school, and anmy other sister studyies at primary school.
It will sound more natural to say: One of my sisters is in high school, and my other sister is in primary school.
One of my sisters, which study ato is in high school, is going to become a doctor like our parents.
Another sister is going to become an engineer, or maybe an architect.
It will sound more natural to say: My other sister is going to become an engineer or maybe an architect
Sometimes, I have my famaily over to eat homemade food.
My girlfriend's cooking is so delicious, and she makes perfect meals.
It usually happens aton the weekend.
I have a very wonderful family and girlfriend.
I'm confident I can rely on my family orand girlfriend.
Thanks for reading my journal.
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Nice job! Most of my corrections are just small grammar errors, but the meaning of what you wrote is clear and understandable.
One of sisters, which study at high school, is going to become a doctor like our parents. One of my sisters, wh
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I want to tell you about my family. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I have mother, father and two younger sisters. I have a mother, father, and two younger sisters. You can also say: I have a mother, a father, and two younger sisters. I have a mother, father, and two younger sisters. |
My parents are doctors and my sisters are pupils. My parents are doctors and my sisters are Pupils is overly formal and you won't really see people using it even in written language. A more common way to say it would be: My sisters are in school. My parents are doctors and my sisters are |
My parents met at the medical university when they studed. My parents met at the medical university when they studied there. You might say instead: My parents met at the medical university where they studied. It's a little different, but it has the same general meaning and sounds more natural. My parents met |
My mother is from province and my father from city. My mother is from I'm sorry, I'm not sure what you mean by province here. It can change depending on the region. If you mean a rural area that is not from the city, you might say countryside to sound more natural. My mother is from the province and my father from the city. I'm not sure what you mean by province... Do you perhaps mean from the countryside? |
My parants and my younger sisters live at apartment in downtown.I live with my girlfriend in neighboring area at own apartment. My par My par |
One of sisters study at high school and another sister study at primary school. One of my sisters stud It will sound more natural to say: One of my sisters is in high school, and my other sister is in primary school. One of my sisters |
Another sister is going to become an engineer, maybe architect. Another sister is going to become an engineer It will sound more natural to say: My other sister is going to become an engineer or maybe an architect
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Sometimes, I have my famaly over to eat homemade food. Sometimes, I have my fam Sometimes, I have my fam |
My girlfriend cook so delicous and perfect meals. My girlfriend's cooking is so delicious, and she makes perfect meals. My girlfriend cook |
It usually happens at the weekend. It usually happens It usually happens |
I have very wonderful family and girlfriend. I have a very wonderful family and girlfriend. I have a very wonderful family and girlfriend. |
I confident I can rely on my family or girlfriend. I'm confident I can rely on my family I am confident I can rely on my family |
Thanks for reading my journal. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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