Oct. 19, 2021
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I work in an agricultural radio and television school. The school is responsible for training farmers in my district. Anhui province has 13 prefectural level cities, 9 county level cities, 50 counties and 45 municipal districts. In theory, every administrative reigns should have this type of school. Anhui agricultural radio and television school is our head school. It has the highest administrative level in all the schools in Anhui Province and it directs the works of all the schools in Anhui province. Every year, the provincial school will organize training courses to promote the knowledge and pedagogical skills of teachers in the schools of our province. I have the chance to attend the training this year. The training for this year will last two days and there are four courses during this training. Two lessons one day, one in the morning and another in the afternoon. Food and accommodations are free in the training, and the training takes place at a hotel in Hefei, the capital of Anhui. I eat at and live in the hotel. I took some photos of the hotel. Let me share it with you guys. I think the hotel is wonderful. What do you think?
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The school is responsible for training farmers in my district.
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I have the chance to attend the training this year.
The training for this year will last two days, and there are four courses during this training.
There are two lessons oneeach day, one in the morning and another in the afternoon.
Food and accommodations are free in the training, and the training takes place at a hotel in Hefei, the capital of Anhui.
Oct. 21, 2021
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I work in an agricultural radio and television school. I work "in" is not wrong here, but "at an" sounds better |
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Anhui province has 13 prefectural level cities, 9 county level cities, 50 counties and 45 municipal districts. Anhui Oxford comma |
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In theory, every administrative reigns should have this type of school. In theory, every administrative re |
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Anhui agricultural radio and television school is our head school. Anhui |
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It has the highest administrative level in all the schools in Anhui Province and it directs the works of all the schools in Anhui province. It |
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Every year, the provincial school will organize training courses to promote the knowledge and pedagogical skills of teachers in the schools of our province. Every year, the provincial school will organize training courses to |
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I have the chance to attend the training this year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The training for this year will last two days and there are four courses during this training. The training for this year will last two days, and there are four courses during this training. |
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Two lessons one day, one in the morning and another in the afternoon. There are two lessons |
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Food and accommodations are free in the training, and the training takes place at a hotel in Hefei, the capital of Anhui. Food and accommodation |
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I eat at and live in the hotel. |
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I took some photos of the hotel. |
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Let me share it with you guys. |
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I think the hotel is wonderful. |
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What do you think? |
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