Oct. 17, 2021
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Today I took a high-speed train to go to Hefei. At Fuyang High-speed West station, I took some pictures. I forgot when the station started to be built, but I remember exactly it's the high-speed railway station in the prefecture cities in Anhui Province that were the last to be built. However, all of its infrastructure is almost done now. As you can see, it looks really beautiful, does it? My home city, Fuyang, is about 220 kilometers away from Hefei, but the whole trip only takes one hour and twenty minutes. The highest speed of the train can reach 350 kilometers per hour, but on this trip, it only runs at the highest speed of 300 kilometers per hour. Maybe it is for the sake of safety. High-speed trains are really fast and it's very convenient for us to travel around. Do your guys' countries have high-speed trains? What do you think about high-speed trains?
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Today I took a high-speed train to go to Hefei.
"to go to Hefei" is gramatically correct, but "to Hefei" sounds more natural.
At Fuyang High-speed West station, I took some pictures.
I forgot when the station started to bewas built, but I remember exactlythat it's the high-speed railway station in the prefecture cities in Anhui Province that were the last to be built.
However, all of its infrastructure is almost done now.
As you can see, it looks really beautiful, doesn't it?
My home city, Fuyang, is about 220 kilometers away from Hefei, but the whole trip only takes one hour and twenty minutes.
The highest speed of the train can reach 350 kilometers per hour, but on this trip, it only runs at the highest speed of 300 kilometers per hour.
Maybe it is for the sake of safety.
High-speed trains are really fast and it's very convenient for us to travel around.
Do your guys' countries have high-speed trains?
What do you think about high-speed trains?
Oct. 17, 2021
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Today I took a high-speed train to go to Hefei. Today I took a high-speed train to "to go to Hefei" is gramatically correct, but "to Hefei" sounds more natural. |
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At Fuyang High-speed West station, I took some pictures. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I forgot when the station started to be built, but I remember exactly it's the high-speed railway station in the prefecture cities in Anhui Province that were the last to be built. I forgot when the station |
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However, all of its infrastructure is almost done now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As you can see, it looks really beautiful, does it? As you can see, it looks really beautiful, doesn't it? |
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My home city, Fuyang, is about 220 kilometers away from Hefei, but the whole trip only takes one hour and twenty minutes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The highest speed of the train can reach 350 kilometers per hour, but on this trip, it only runs at the highest speed of 300 kilometers per hour. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Maybe it is for the sake of safety. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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High-speed trains are really fast and it's very convenient for us to travel around. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Do your guys' countries have high-speed trains? Do your |
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What do you think about high-speed trains? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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