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Jack

Oct. 8, 2021

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It's true that the change of seasons will bring about emotional changes, but I don't think I belong to this situation.
I think sometimes I am sentimental, but the situation won't last long and I can be back to normal soon.
Summer has indeed passed. In the past few days, the highest temperature hasn't exceeded 23 degrees and the lowest temperature has dropped almost to 10 degrees. I have to wear two clothes to keep warm now.
In the blink of an eye, this year has almost passed. I have been studying hard in English and I dare not to waste even the slightest amount of time. I don't know if I have made some progress, but I do think that I should have made some progress.
I suddenly thought of the famous poet HaiZi and his poems were very well written. Let me read one of his poems to share with you.

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It's true that the change of seasonseasonal changes will bring about emotional changes, but I don't think I belong to this situationthat applies to me.

I think sometimes I am sentimental, but the situation won' sometimes, but it does not last long and I can be backreturn to normal soonfast.

do you mean you don't stay sentimental for long?

Summer has indeed passed.

In the past few days, the highest temperature hasn't exceeded 23 degrees and the lowest temperature has dropped to almost to 10 degrees.

I have to wear two pieces of clothesing to keep warm now.

In the blink of an eye, thise year hais almost passedover.

not wrong, sounds awkward

I have been studying hard in English and I dare not to waste even the slightest amount of time.

I don't know if I have made some progress, but I do think that I should have made some progress.

I suddenly thought of the famous poet HaiZi and, his poems were very well written.

Let me read one of his poems to share with you.

or "Let me read one of his poems to you"

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It's true that the change of seasons will bring about emotional changes, but I don't think I belong to this situation.


It's true that the change of seasonseasonal changes will bring about emotional changes, but I don't think I belong to this situationthat applies to me.

I think sometimes I am sentimental, but the situation won't last long and I can be back to normal soon.


I think sometimes I am sentimental, but the situation won' sometimes, but it does not last long and I can be backreturn to normal soonfast.

do you mean you don't stay sentimental for long?

Summer has indeed passed.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In the past few days, the highest temperature hasn't exceeded 23 degrees and the lowest temperature has dropped almost to 10 degrees.


In the past few days, the highest temperature hasn't exceeded 23 degrees and the lowest temperature has dropped to almost to 10 degrees.

I have to wear two clothes to keep warm now.


I have to wear two pieces of clothesing to keep warm now.

In the blink of an eye, this year has almost passed.


In the blink of an eye, thise year hais almost passedover.

not wrong, sounds awkward

I have been studying hard in English and I dare not to waste even the slightest amount of time.


I have been studying hard in English and I dare not to waste even the slightest amount of time.

I don't know if I have made some progress, but I do think that I should have made some progress.


I don't know if I have made some progress, but I do think that I should have made some progress.

I suddenly thought of the famous poet HaiZi and his poems were very well written.


I suddenly thought of the famous poet HaiZi and, his poems were very well written.

Let me read one of his poems to share with you.


Let me read one of his poems to share with you.

or "Let me read one of his poems to you"

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