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Jack

Oct. 4, 2021

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Of countless sports, my favorite is swimming.
Firstly, I think it's fun in the water.
Swimming can help us reduce stress and brings us relaxed and joyful feelings.
Secondly, swimming is good for our health. Swimming can help us prevent heart disease and lung disease.
Finally, swimming is a wonderful spot.
In addition, swimming is an important skill. If we come to a lake or where there is water and accidentally fall into the water, and we can't swim, it will be very dangerous.
In a word, swimming is my favorite sport.

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Of countless sports, my favorite is swimming.


Firstly, I think it's fun in the water.


Swimming can help us reduce stress and brings us relaxed and joyful feelings.


Secondly, swimming is good for our health.


Swimming can help us prevent heart disease and lung disease.


Finally, swimming is a wonderful spot.


In addition, swimming is an important skill.


If we come to a lake or where there is water and accidentally fall into the water, and we can't swim, it will be very dangerous.


In a word, swimming is my favorite sport.


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