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Jack

Sept. 16, 2021

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I remember I heard you speak Chinese. Although there are only one or two sentences, I am sure you speak very well.
I don't want to go to restaurants to eat, because they always put too much seasoning, and lose the original taste of the food.
I am sure I can't go aboard until I retire, unless I have immediate family members overseas because our country has some special regulations for civil servants.
If I had the opportunity to go to Canada, my first choice would be the town you live in or where you grew up, because I am curious, and the pictures you sent me are also beautiful.
Your video reminds me of when I was a kid. Every late autumn we would see groups of geese flying southward. They flew very high, and were always in a herringbone shape. When we saw the northern geese flying south, we knew the weather was getting colder and winter was coming.
I am very glad to read these lyrics for you, even though I am not a professional reciter. You know, a good lyrics is a poem, it can arouse people's infinite resonance.

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I remember I heard you speak Chinese.

Although there awere only one or two sentences, I am sure you speak very well.

I don't want to go to restaurants to eat, because they always put too much seasoning, and losewhich drowns the original taste of the food.

I am sure I can't go aboard until I retire, unless I have immediate family members overseas because our country has some special regulations for civil servants.

If I had the opportunity to go to Canada, my first choice would be the town you live in or where you grew up, because I am curious, and the pictures you sent me are also beautiful.

I think you should break up this sentence

Your video reminds me of when I was a kid.

Every late autumn we would see groups of geese flying southward.

They flew very high, and were always in a herringbone shape.

When we saw the northern geese flying south, we knew the weather was getting colder and winter was coming.

I am very glad to read these lyrics for you, even though I am not a professional reciter.

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Jack

Oct. 10, 2021

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Thank you very much.

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I remember I heard you speak Chinese.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Although there are only one or two sentences, I am sure you speak very well.


Although there awere only one or two sentences, I am sure you speak very well.

I don't want to go to restaurants to eat, because they always put too much seasoning, and lose the original taste of the food.


I don't want to go to restaurants to eat, because they always put too much seasoning, and losewhich drowns the original taste of the food.

I am sure I can't go aboard until I retire, unless I have immediate family members overseas because our country has some special regulations for civil servants.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If I had the opportunity to go to Canada, my first choice would be the town you live in or where you grew up, because I am curious, and the pictures you sent me are also beautiful.


If I had the opportunity to go to Canada, my first choice would be the town you live in or where you grew up, because I am curious, and the pictures you sent me are also beautiful.

I think you should break up this sentence

Your video reminds me of when I was a kid.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Every late autumn we would see groups of geese flying southward.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They flew very high, and were always in a herringbone shape.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When we saw the northern geese flying south, we knew the weather was getting colder and winter was coming.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am very glad to read these lyrics for you, even though I am not a professional reciter.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You know, a good lyrics is a poem, it can arouse people's infinite resonance.


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