Nov. 13, 2023
If I had anything, what was it?
Today I want to think about this question. If I could want anything I think it was strong health. I will explain for what. If you have strong health you can do anything you want. For example, if you want to climb on the Everest you need prepare befor climbing. Or, if you want build big company you mist work 24/7 everyday at the begining. Or, if you want to be a proffesional sportman of course you must have strong health etc.
I mean you can do anything you want, but I think you should have strong health. It isn't mandatory item, but with strong health you can turn around a mountain. How sad Archimedes: "Give me a foothold and I will move the Earth"
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Journal #25: "How I'm learning English"
If I hadcould have anything, what was itould it be?
Today, I want to think about this question.
If I could wanthave anything, I think it was strongould be health.
To have "health" is the same as "strong health", which we don't really say. You can also say "to be healthy."
I will explain for whatwhy.
If you have strongare healthy, you can do anything you want.
For example, if you want to climb on theMt. Everest, you need to prepare before climbing.
Or, if you want to build a big company you miust work 24/7 every day at the beginning.
Or, if you want to be a proffessional sportmans player, of course, you must have strongbe health etcy.
We only use etc. if you have already said 2 or more things.
Ex. I want a bike, a car, etc.
I mean, you can do anything you want to, but I think you should have strongbe healthy.
It isn't mandatory item, but with stronggood health you can turn aroundmove a mountain.
In English, the idiom is always "to move a mountain."
How sadLike Archimedes: said, "Give me a foothold and I will move the Earth"
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Feedback
I can't tell if you mean good health/healthy (ie. not sick, able to do many things, etc.) or really strong/fit (ie. sports player, mountain climber, boxer, etc.). If it's the first, the corrections I made are okay. If it is the second, I would recommend using the word "fit" or "athletic".
If I hadcould have anything, what was itould it be?
If I could wanthave anything, I think it wasould be strong health.
I will explain for whatwhy.
If you have strong health, you can do anything you want.
For example, if you want to climb on theMt. Everest, you need prepare before climbing.
Or, if you want build a big company, you miust work 24/7 everyday at the beginning.
Or, if you want to be a proffessional sportman of courseathlete, obviously you must have strong health etc.
I mean, you can do anything you want, but I think you should have stronggood health.
It isn't mandatory itemnecessary, but with stronggood health you can turn around a mountain.
How sad Archimedes said this: "Give me a foothold and I will move the Earth"
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Thank you for reading my journal.
Journal #25: "How I'm learning English" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today I want to think about this question. Today, I want to think about this question. |
If I could want anything I think it was strong health. If I could If I could To have "health" is the same as "strong health", which we don't really say. You can also say "to be healthy." |
I will explain for what. I will explain I will explain |
If you have strong health you can do anything you want. If you have strong health, you can do anything you want. If you |
For example, if you want to climb on the Everest you need prepare befor climbing. For example, if you want to climb For example, if you want to climb |
Or, if you want build big company you mist work 24/7 everyday at the begining. Or, if you want build a big company, you m Or, if you want to build a big company you m |
Or, if you want to be a proffesional sportman of course you must have strong health etc. Or, if you want to be a prof Or, if you want to be a prof We only use etc. if you have already said 2 or more things. Ex. I want a bike, a car, etc. |
I mean you can do anything you want, but I think you should have strong health. I mean, you can do anything you want, but I think you should have I mean, you can do anything you want to, but I think you should |
It isn't mandatory item, but with strong health you can turn around a mountain. It isn't It isn't mandatory In English, the idiom is always "to move a mountain." |
How sad Archimedes: "Give me a foothold and I will move the Earth" Thank for reading my journal.
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