Sept. 14, 2021
Journal
This picture was taken a few days ago to show my language partner about the roads in our city. As you can see, the road in the picture is divided into motor vehicle lanes and non-motor vehicle lanes by greenery belts. On the two non-motor vehicle lanes on both sides of the roads, there are some parking areas. Alongside the outside of the two non-motor vehicle lanes, there are two rows of tall trees, but I forgot what kind of trees they are. The weather looked really pretty with blue skies and white clouds and the mark lines on the road were also beautiful too. Do you want to know the road name and which city it is in?
Journal
This picture was taken a few days ago to show my language partner about the roads in our city.
As you can see, the road in the picture is divided by greenery belts into motor vehicle lanes and non-motor vehicle lanes by greenery belts.
What you wrote is correct, but I think this version is a bit clearer.
OnThere are parking areas next to the two non-motor vehicle lanes on both sides of the roads, there are some parking areas.
I rephrased the sentence to make it clearer. I hope this is what you meant!
Alongside the outside of the two non-motor vehicle lanes, there are two rows of tall trees, but I forgot what kind of trees they are.
The weather looked really pretty with blue skies, and white clouds and the mark lines on the road were also beautiful too.
No need for "also" and "too" - just choose one.
Do you want to know the road name and which city it is in?
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Your English has gotten so good! I'm really impressed.
Sept. 15, 2021
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This picture was taken a few days ago to show my language partner about the roads in our city. This picture was taken a few days ago to show my language partner |
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As you can see, the road in the picture is divided into motor vehicle lanes and non-motor vehicle lanes by greenery belts. As you can see, the road in the picture is divided by greenery belts into motor vehicle lanes and non-motor vehicle lanes What you wrote is correct, but I think this version is a bit clearer. |
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On the two non-motor vehicle lanes on both sides of the roads, there are some parking areas.
I rephrased the sentence to make it clearer. I hope this is what you meant! |
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Alongside the outside of the two non-motor vehicle lanes, there are two rows of tall trees, but I forgot what kind of trees they are. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The weather looked really pretty with blue skies and white clouds and the mark lines on the road were also beautiful too. The weather looked really pretty with blue skies, and white clouds and the mark lines on the road were also beautiful No need for "also" and "too" - just choose one. |
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Do you want to know the road name and which city it is in? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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