Sept. 12, 2021
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I have checked the Niagara Fall location on Google map. The Niagara River connects Lake Erie with Lake Ontario, but before it gets there, the water plunges down almost 170 feet in a straight drop. That is why Niagara Fall was formed. The natural landscapes there must be beautiful because of the special terrain. From the videos you sent me, The Niagara Fall is really amazing, especially at nights. It’s huge, colorful and moving. And you can see the scenery of both sides of different countries. If only I had been there! Enjoy your trip. stay happy and stay safe.
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I have checked the location of Niagara Fall locations on Google maps.
The Niagara River connects Lake Erie with Lake Ontario, but, before it gets there, the water plunges down almost 170 feet in a straight dropstraight down for almost 170 feet.
That is why, creating the Niagara Fall was formeds.
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The natural landscapesSuch special thererain must bcreate beautiful because of the special terrainnatural landscapes.
From the videos you sent me, The Niagara Fall iss are really amazing, especially at nights.
It’sThey're huge, colorful and moving.
And you can see the scenery of both sides offrom two different countries.
If only I had been there!
Enjoy your trip.
stay happy and stay safe.
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Nice writing!
Sept. 13, 2021
Thank you very much.
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I have checked the Niagara Fall location on Google map. I have checked the location of Niagara Fall |
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The Niagara River connects Lake Erie with Lake Ontario, but before it gets there, the water plunges down almost 170 feet in a straight drop. The Niagara River connects Lake Erie with Lake Ontario, but, before it gets there, the water plunges |
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That is why Niagara Fall was formed.
connect to previous sentence. |
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The natural landscapes there must be beautiful because of the special terrain.
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From the videos you sent me, The Niagara Fall is really amazing, especially at nights. From the videos you sent me, The Niagara Fall |
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It’s huge, colorful and moving.
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And you can see the scenery of both sides of different countries. And you can see the scenery |
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If only I had been there! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Enjoy your trip. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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stay happy and stay safe. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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