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Sept. 9, 2021

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As far as I know, every city in China has non-motor vehicle lanes. There are many shared e-bicycles on our streets. When people need to ride, just scan the QR code on the bicycle with your mobile phone, then you can ride it around the city. Riding fees are so cheap, its starting price is only 1 or 2 RMB. It's very convenient to go anywhere in the city and you don't need to take a bus or a taxi. Sometime ago, there were many shared pedal bicycles on the street, but now, somehow they have disappeared. I really miss them because they are environmentally friendly and can keep our bodies healthy.

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As far as I know, every city in China has non-motor vehiclbike lanes.

There are many shared e-bicycles on our streets.

When people need toa ride, they just scan the QR code on the bicycle with youtheir mobile phone, and then youthey can ride it around the city.

Important to keep your pronouns matched the whole way through the sentence.

Riding fees are soThe cost to ride one is very cheap, its starting price is only 1 or 2 RMB.

Wow, that's really cheap!

It's very convenient to be able to go anywhere in the city and you don'without needing to take a bus or a taxi.

Some time ago, there were many shared pedalnon-electric bicycles on the street, but now, somehowfor some reason, they have disappeared.

I really miss them because they are environmentally friendly and can keep our bodies healthyare good exercise.

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As far as I know, every city in China has non-motor vehicle lanes.


As far as I know, every city in China has non-motor vehiclbike lanes.

There are many shared e-bicycles on our streets.


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When people need to ride, just scan the QR code on the bicycle with your mobile phone, then you can ride it around the city.


When people need toa ride, they just scan the QR code on the bicycle with youtheir mobile phone, and then youthey can ride it around the city.

Important to keep your pronouns matched the whole way through the sentence.

Riding fees are so cheap, its starting price is only 1 or 2 RMB.


Riding fees are soThe cost to ride one is very cheap, its starting price is only 1 or 2 RMB.

Wow, that's really cheap!

It's very convenient to go anywhere in the city and you don't need to take a bus or a taxi.


It's very convenient to be able to go anywhere in the city and you don'without needing to take a bus or a taxi.

Sometime ago, there were many shared pedal bicycles on the street, but now, somehow they have disappeared.


Some time ago, there were many shared pedalnon-electric bicycles on the street, but now, somehowfor some reason, they have disappeared.

I really miss them because they are environmentally friendly and can keep our bodies healthy.


I really miss them because they are environmentally friendly and can keep our bodies healthyare good exercise.

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