Feb. 18, 2021
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I went to see my father-in-law yesterday morning.
I bought perch, roast duck, bread, cantaloupe, kiwi fruit, mango and durian in Wanjiafu Supermarket. It cost nearly 600 yuan in total. But do you know how much a durian costs? Nearly 300. Its price here is one kilo in 90 yuan.
As a result, this durian is not delicious, and its flesh is not as soft as others, but a little hard, which is the feeling that it is not ripe.
I really can't figure out why durian is so expensive, and the pulp of this durian is just a little more than 0.5 kilo at most, which is even more incredible.
If it wasn't for giving away, I would never buy it, which is extremely uneconomical.
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I went to see my father-in-law yesterday morning.
I bought perch, roast duck, bread, cantaloupe, kiwi fruit, mango and durian inat Wanjiafu Supermarket.
It cost nearly 600 yuan in total.
But dDo you know how much a durian costs?
"But" doesn't really fit because there's no contradiction here.
Nearly 300.
Its price here is one kilo in 90 yuan90 yuan for one kilo.
As a result, this durian idoes not delicioustaste very good, and its flesh is not as soft as others', but a little hard, which ileaves the feeling that it is not ripe.
I'm not sure whether "As a result" fits. On the one hand, if durian fruits are scarce, that would explain both the high price and the low quality. But on the other, one might expect that people would only pay a high price if the fruits had high quality. Maybe you could replace "As a result" with "Even at that price".
I really can't figure out why durian is so expensive, and the pulp of this durian is just a little more than 0.5 kilo at most, which is even more incredible.
If it wasn't for giving awayI weren't giving it to someone else, I would never buy it, whichsince it is extremely uneconomical.
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Feb. 19, 2021
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I went to see my father-in-law yesterday morning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I bought perch, roast duck, bread, cantaloupe, kiwi fruit, mango and durian in Wanjiafu Supermarket. I bought perch, roast duck, bread, cantaloupe, kiwi fruit, mango and durian |
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It cost nearly 600 yuan in total. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But do you know how much a durian costs?
"But" doesn't really fit because there's no contradiction here. |
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Nearly 300. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Its price here is one kilo in 90 yuan. Its price here is |
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As a result, this durian is not delicious, and its flesh is not as soft as others, but a little hard, which is the feeling that it is not ripe. As a result, this durian I'm not sure whether "As a result" fits. On the one hand, if durian fruits are scarce, that would explain both the high price and the low quality. But on the other, one might expect that people would only pay a high price if the fruits had high quality. Maybe you could replace "As a result" with "Even at that price". |
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I really can't figure out why durian is so expensive, and the pulp of this durian is just a little more than 0.5 kilo at most, which is even more incredible. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If it wasn't for giving away, I would never buy it, which is extremely uneconomical. If |
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