Sept. 2, 2021
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China is a big country and it has a lot of beautiful scenery. When you swim in the sea on Hainan island, Hailongjiang in the northeast is icy and snowy. When you greet the first layer of sunshine on the east coast, the compatriots in Xinjiang are sleeping in their dreams.
I am the son of a farmer and I know deeply about the difficulties of being a farmer. Although agriculture is the primary industry and the basic industry, it is still hard for farmers to make money. Although the lives of farmers have been improved significantly, compared with other industries, the pay and the return are still not proportional.
China has an idiom called 白驹过隙, which means that time passes quickly. Autumn begins on August 7th, and almost one month has passed since summer.
I have read the article "A Race Against Time" written by Lin Qingxuan and I am deeply impressed. In the face of the passing time, all we can do is work hard and run forward, and we must run ahead of time.
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China is a big country and it has a lot of beautiful scenery.
Whilen you swim in the sea on Hainan island, Haeilongjiang in the northeast is icy and snowy.
When you greet the first lrayers of sunshine on the east coast, the compatriots in Xinjiang are sleepdreaming in their dreamssleep.
I am the son of a farmer and I know deeplymuch about the difficulties of being a farmer.
Although agriculture is thea primary industry and the basic industryand essential industry in China, it is still hard for farmers to make money.
Although the lives of farmers have been improved significantly, compared with other industries, the pay and the return are still not proportional.
China has an idiom called 白驹过隙, which means that time passes quickly.
Autumn begins on August 7th, and almost one month has passed since summer began.
I have read thean article, "A Race Against Time," written by Lin Qingxuan, and I amwas deeply impressed.
In the face of the passingage of time, all we can do is work hard and run forward, and we must run ahead of time.
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Nice work!
Sept. 5, 2021
Whilen you swim in the sea on Hainan island, Haeilongjiang in the northeast is icy and snowy.
I'm so embarrassed about writing the wrong Pinyin for "黑龙江" as a Chinese person.
Sept. 5, 2021
I'm so embarrassed about writing the wrong Pinyin for "黑龙江" as a Chinese person.
Lol it's all good, pinyin is weird.
Sept. 5, 2021
Autumn begins on August 7th, and almost one month has passed since summer began.
I think it should be “since summer finished”
Sept. 5, 2021
Thank you very much.
Sept. 5, 2021
I think it should be “since summer finished”
Sorry, I'm a little confused on the timeline. Maybe then "Autumn began on August 7th, and almost one month has passed since summer ended."
Sept. 5, 2021
Sorry, I'm a little confused on the timeline. Maybe then "Autumn began on August 7th, and almost one month has passed since summer ended."
Yes, that was what I really mean. But in the original sentence, I wrote the wrong tense “begins”.
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China is a big country and it has a lot of beautiful scenery. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When you swim in the sea on Hainan island, Hailongjiang in the northeast is icy and snowy. While |
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When you greet the first layer of sunshine on the east coast, the compatriots in Xinjiang are sleeping in their dreams. When you greet the first |
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I am the son of a farmer and I know deeply about the difficulties of being a farmer. I am the son of a farmer and I know |
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Although agriculture is the primary industry and the basic industry, it is still hard for farmers to make money. Although agriculture is |
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Although the lives of farmers have been improved significantly, compared with other industries, the pay and the return are still not proportional. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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China has an idiom called 白驹过隙, which means that time passes quickly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Autumn begins on August 7th, and almost one month has passed since summer. Autumn begins on August 7th, and almost one month has passed since summer began. |
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I have read the article "A Race Against Time" written by Lin Qingxuan and I am deeply impressed. I |
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In the face of the passing time, all we can do is work hard and run forward, and we must run ahead of time. In the face of the pass |
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