Aug. 24, 2021
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I could feel a little cold this morning when I wore a short-sleeve shirt and it reminds me of a period when I was an intern on a farm at the age of seventeen. That was the second year I was in a professional secondary school and I went to a farm as an intern to practice machine ploughing. Every morning I saw the mist covering the fields and the morning glory on the fence. The air was fresh and kinda cooler, so I needed to wear a thin sweater. Corn, beans and some other crops were already ripe on the farm, which bought me a lot of joy. Time flies, decades have passed and I am no longer that teenager, but I still miss those morning glories and those beautiful pastoral scenery.
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I could feelfelt a little cold this morning when I woreas wearing a short-sleeve shirt, and it remindsed me of a period when I was an intern on a farm at the age of seventeen.
That was the second year I was in a professional secondary school, and I went to a farm as an intern to practice machine ploughing.
More concise: "That was my second year of professional secondary school..."
Every morning I saw the mist covering the fields and the morning gloryies on the fence.
Omitting the "thes" sounds more natural to me, but that might be a preference thing.
The air was fresh and kinda of cooler, so I needed to wear a thin sweater.
"Kinda" is definitely something people say in informal conversation, but it's only used in very informal writing. If you want your writing to sound more polished, you could say "rather" or "somewhat" instead.
Time flies, decades have passed and I am no longer that teenager, but I still miss those morning glories and thoseat beautiful pastoral scenery.
Very poetic :)
Aug. 24, 2021
Thank you very much.
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I could feel a little cold this morning when I wore a short-sleeve shirt and it reminds me of a period when I was an intern on a farm at the age of seventeen. I |
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That was the second year I was in a professional secondary school and I went to a farm as an intern to practice machine ploughing. That was the second year I was in a professional secondary school, and I went to a farm as an intern to practice machine ploughing. More concise: "That was my second year of professional secondary school..." |
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Every morning I saw the mist covering the fields and the morning glory on the fence. Every morning I saw Omitting the "thes" sounds more natural to me, but that might be a preference thing. |
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The air was fresh and kinda cooler, so I needed to wear a thin sweater. The air was fresh and kind "Kinda" is definitely something people say in informal conversation, but it's only used in very informal writing. If you want your writing to sound more polished, you could say "rather" or "somewhat" instead. |
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Corn, beans and some other crops were already ripe on the farm, which bought me a lot of joy. |
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Time flies, decades have passed and I am no longer that teenager, but I still miss those morning glories and those beautiful pastoral scenery. Time flies, decades have passed and I am no longer that teenager, but I still miss those morning glories and th Very poetic :) |
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