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Jack

Aug. 14, 2021

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You are right. I will do some preparing work about those topics, but when we actually discuss them I will talk about those issues just based on those prepared work, but not exactly according to them. When I first talked to you, I was aware that you must be a teacher sometime ago because I feel you really have good teaching experience. I just didn't tell you. Again, thank you for your consideration and I am very grateful. I am looking forward to seeing you next Wednesday. Have an amazing day!

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You are right.

I will do some preparingprepare some work abouton those topics, but when we actually discuss them I will talk about those issues just loosely based on thoseat prepared work, but not exactly according to themnot following it exactly.

"preparing work" is not correctly, you could say "preparatory work" but this is quite formal. I don't think there is enough difference between the meaning of the phrases 'based on' and 'according to' to get enough contrast, so I used 'loosely based on' vs. 'following exactly' to make it clearer. 'Work' is a mass noun so you should use 'that work' not 'those work'.

When I first talked to you, I was awarethought that you must behave been a teacher sometime agoin the past because I fcould seel you really have goodhad a lot of teaching experience.

OR because you gave me such a great learning experience.

I just didn't tell you.

Again, thank you for your consideration and I am very grateful.

I am looking forward to seeing you next Wednesday.

Have an amazing day!

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Jack

Aug. 15, 2021

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Thank you for those corrections and explanations. Thank you very much.

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You are right.


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I will do some preparing work about those topics, but when we actually discuss them I will talk about those issues just based on those prepared work, but not exactly according to them.


I will do some preparingprepare some work abouton those topics, but when we actually discuss them I will talk about those issues just loosely based on thoseat prepared work, but not exactly according to themnot following it exactly.

"preparing work" is not correctly, you could say "preparatory work" but this is quite formal. I don't think there is enough difference between the meaning of the phrases 'based on' and 'according to' to get enough contrast, so I used 'loosely based on' vs. 'following exactly' to make it clearer. 'Work' is a mass noun so you should use 'that work' not 'those work'.

When I first talked to you, I was aware that you must be a teacher sometime ago because I feel you really have good teaching experience.


When I first talked to you, I was awarethought that you must behave been a teacher sometime agoin the past because I fcould seel you really have goodhad a lot of teaching experience.

OR because you gave me such a great learning experience.

I just didn't tell you.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Again, thank you for your consideration and I am very grateful.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am looking forward to seeing you next Wednesday.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Have an amazing day!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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