Aug. 8, 2021
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I am different from other English learners because I only want to practice my speaking, so I prefer having free talk, not reading, writing, listening or grammar because I can practice them on my phone by myself. This requires my teachers to be skilled talkers to lead our conversations. They can not say too much or very quickly. If they say too much, I would lose the chance to speak and if they speak quickly it is difficult to follow them. Apart from this, the topics can not be very professional, because they would involve many different new words that I don't know, and I will be stuck in the middle of the conversation. The most important thing is that teachers should not have a strong accent, which would be difficult to understand. Furthermore, teachers must have passions, and have to be patient, otherwise the effect of the lessons will not be good.
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I am different from other English learners because I only want to practice my speaking, so I prefer having free talking, not reading, writing, listening or grammar because I can practice them on my phone by myself.
"To have a talk" in English refers to a single non-ongoing instance of talking, hence why it is "a" talk, noting the use of the indefinite article "a" (for example, when there is a problem at work you might say "I will have a talk with John to resolve this problem"). You can alternatively say, "I prefer having conversations".
This requires my teachers to be skilled talkers to lead our conversations.
They can not say too much or very quickly.
If they say too much, I would lose the chance to speak and if they speak quickly it is difficult to follow them.
Apart from this, the topics can not be very professiontechnical, because they would involve many different new words that I don't know, and I will be stuck in the middle of the conversation.
Any English speaker will understand what is meant by "professional" so it is okay to use, but "technical" is a better choice of word.
The most important thing is that teachers should not have a strong accent, which would be difficult to understand.
Furthermore, teachers must have passions, and have to be patient, otherwise the effectoutcome of the lessons will not be good.
Again, any English speaker will understand what is meant by "effect", but "outcome" is a better choice of word.
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Very well written! :)
Aug. 8, 2021
Thank you very much. I am very grateful for all of your corrections.
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I am different from other English learners because I only want to practice my speaking, so I prefer having free talk, not reading, writing, listening or grammar because I can practice them on my phone by myself. I am different from other English learners because I only want to practice my speaking, so I prefer "To have a talk" in English refers to a single non-ongoing instance of talking, hence why it is "a" talk, noting the use of the indefinite article "a" (for example, when there is a problem at work you might say "I will have a talk with John to resolve this problem"). You can alternatively say, "I prefer having conversations". |
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This requires my teachers to be skilled talkers to lead our conversations. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They can not say too much or very quickly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If they say too much, I would lose the chance to speak and if they speak quickly it is difficult to follow them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Apart from this, the topics can not be very professional, because they would involve many different new words that I don't know, and I will be stuck in the middle of the conversation. Apart from this, the topics can not be very Any English speaker will understand what is meant by "professional" so it is okay to use, but "technical" is a better choice of word. |
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The most important thing is that teachers should not have a strong accent, which would be difficult to understand. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Furthermore, teachers must have passions, and have to be patient, otherwise the effect of the lessons will not be good. Furthermore, teachers must have passions, and have to be patient, otherwise the Again, any English speaker will understand what is meant by "effect", but "outcome" is a better choice of word. |
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