March 11, 2021
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I don't know why, but I think I like the state of being addicted to something. The object could be a person, a thing, or even education. It could be a desire or a drive to get out of an adverse situation. It could be a short-term goal or a life goal. Whatever it is, I feel like I need some kind of force to get me moving. Or I feel down.
It could be because of the fact that I'm working as a freelancer these days, and I'm not as busy as I was in the past. Before this year, I had always lived my life in a state of great stress. However, my life these days is pretty peaceful, compared to before. Why can't I get used to this life? I never seem to be able to just accept situations as they are, and enjoy them.
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I don't know why, but I think I like the state of being addicted to something.
The objecIt could be a person, a thing, or even education.
Sounds more natural
It could be a desire or a drive to get out of an adverse situation.
It could be a short-term goal or a life goal.
Whatever it is, I feel like I need some kind of force to get me moving.
Or I feel down.
It could be because of the fact that I'm working as a freelancer these days, and I'm not as busy as I was in the past.
Before this year, I had always lived my life in a state of greatmy life was spent under a great deal of stress.
The previous sentence was also correct, but sounded a little unusual.
However, my life these days is pretty peaceful, compared to before.
We don't need "compared to before" because we understand the comparison from the previous sentence.
Why can't I get used to this life?
I never seem to be able to just accept situations as they are, and enjoy them.
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This whole entry was correct and very well written :)
My corrections were only to make it sound more like a native speaker.
March 14, 2021
Thank you very much . : - >>>
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I don't know why, but I think I like the state of being addicted to something. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The object could be a person, a thing, or even education.
Sounds more natural |
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It could be a desire or a drive to get out of an adverse situation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It could be a short-term goal or a life goal. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I feel like I need some kind of force to get me moving. |
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Or I feel down. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It could be because of the fact that I'm working as a freelancer these days, and I'm not as busy as I was in the past. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Before this year, I had always lived my life in a state of great stress, and my life these days is pretty peaceful, compared to before. |
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Why can't I get used to this life? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I never seem to be able to just accept situations and enjoy them. |
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I never seem to be able to just accept situations as they are, and enjoy them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Whatever it is, I feel like I need some kind of force to get me moving. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Before this year, I had always lived my life in a state of great stress. Before this year, The previous sentence was also correct, but sounded a little unusual. |
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However, my life these days is pretty peaceful, compared to before. However, my life these days is pretty peaceful We don't need "compared to before" because we understand the comparison from the previous sentence. |
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