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Dec. 12, 2020

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Journal 22/22/20

I ate mutton soup at noon. I like eating mutton. As far as I can remember, when I was a child, during winter, our parents sometimes bought a piece of mutton and made mutton soup. The mutton soup was cooked together with some sweet potato vermicelli, Chinese cabbage and radish. We usually cook the mutton first, then put it somewhere waiting for later use. When we wanted to eat mutton soup, we sliced the mutton meat and put it with some sweet potato vermicelli, radish and Chinese cabbage in a pot, then poured a certain water into the pot and boiled them. The cooked mutton meat could be used several times this way. Of course, at that time, life in the countryside was very hard. It was a luxury enjoyment to eat mutton soup, although every time we could only eat a few pieces of mutton meat and just eat those vegetables, and we rarely eat it, but the soup still tasted delicious in our opinion. Many years have passed, although the living conditions have improved unbelievably, mutton soup is still my favorite meal.

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Journal 22/22/20

I ate mutton soup at noon.

I like eating mutton.

As far as I can remember, when I was a child, during winter, our parents sometimes bought a piece of mutton and made mutton soup.

The mutton soup was cooked together with some sweet potato vermicelli, Chinese cabbage and radish.

We usually cook the mutton first, then put it somewhere waiting forto use later use.

It sounds more natural this way in my opinion

When we wanted to eat mutton soup, we sliced the mutton meat and put it with some sweet potato vermicelli, radish and Chinese cabbage in a pot, then poured a certain amount of water into the pot and boiled them.

It was a luxury enjoyment to eat mutton soup, although every time we had it, we could only eat a few pieces of mutton meat and just eat those vegetables, and w. We rarely eate it, but the soup still tasted delicious in our opinion.

the first part sounds more like you're talking about when you're eating the meat instead of the soup.

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Jack

Dec. 15, 2020

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It was a luxury enjoyment to eat mutton soup, although every time we had it, we could only eat a few pieces of mutton meat and just eat those vegetables, and w. We rarely eate it, but the soup still tasted delicious in our opinion.

In this sentence, eat in different tenses. I just know to eat, but I don’t know the use of the rest of them. They make confusing.

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Jack

Dec. 15, 2020

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Thank you very much.

We usually cook the mutton first, then put it somewhere waiting for later use.


We usually cook the mutton first, then put it somewhere waiting forto use later use.

It sounds more natural this way in my opinion

Journal 22/22/20


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I ate mutton soup at noon.


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I like eating mutton.


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As far as I can remember, when I was a child, during winter, our parents sometimes bought a piece of mutton and made mutton soup.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The mutton soup was cooked together with some sweet potato vermicelli, Chinese cabbage and radish.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When we wanted to eat mutton soup, we sliced the mutton meat and put it with some sweet potato vermicelli, radish and Chinese cabbage in a pot, then poured a certain water into the pot and boiled them.


When we wanted to eat mutton soup, we sliced the mutton meat and put it with some sweet potato vermicelli, radish and Chinese cabbage in a pot, then poured a certain amount of water into the pot and boiled them.

The cooked mutton meat could be used several times this way.


Of course, at that time, life in the countryside was very hard.


It was a luxury enjoyment to eat mutton soup, although every time we could only eat a few pieces of mutton meat and just eat those vegetables, and we rarely eat it, but the soup still tasted delicious in our opinion.


It was a luxury enjoyment to eat mutton soup, although every time we had it, we could only eat a few pieces of mutton meat and just eat those vegetables, and w. We rarely eate it, but the soup still tasted delicious in our opinion.

the first part sounds more like you're talking about when you're eating the meat instead of the soup.

Many years have passed, although the living conditions have improved unbelievably, mutton soup is still my favorite meal.


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