Dec. 13, 2020
Journal 22/13/20
What is the meaning of life? I have been thinking about it for a long time. But I can’t get the ideal answers. No matter how great or ordinary you are, there is only one life; several decades of things. It is not about fame or fortune; It is not about authority or money. Healthy and happy may be the most important meaning of life. Yes, that is it. So be healthy and be happy because that is the meaning of life.
Journal 22/13/20
What is the meaning of life?
I have been thinking about it for a long time.
But I can’t get the ideal answers.
No matter how great or ordinary you are, there is only one life; several decades of things.
It is not about fame or fortune; It is not about authority or money.
HBeing healthy and happy may be the most important meaningain purpose of life.
1- "healthy" & "happy" are adjectives, that speak of how something IS (verb TO BE), so you should add the verb "being".
If you don't want to use a verb, you could just modify these adjectives into its noun forms; "Healthiness and happiness are..."
2- "Most important meaning" sounds a bit strange, maybe saying "main" or "principal" would sound better.
3- In this case, I think the meaning you're trying to communicate is more similar to "purpose" than "meaning", as you're saying:
Q)"what is life for (purpose of life)?"
A)"To be healthy and happy."
And "meaning" would be more like:
"Which are the exact words to describe life?"
Yes, that is it.
So be healthy and be happy because that is the meaning of life.
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Dec. 13, 2020
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What is the meaning of life? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have been thinking about it for a long time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But I can’t get the ideal answers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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No matter how great or ordinary you are, there is only one life; several decades of things. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is not about fame or fortune; It is not about authority or money. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Healthy and happy may be the most important meaning of life.
1- "healthy" & "happy" are adjectives, that speak of how something IS (verb TO BE), so you should add the verb "being". If you don't want to use a verb, you could just modify these adjectives into its noun forms; "Healthiness and happiness are..." 2- "Most important meaning" sounds a bit strange, maybe saying "main" or "principal" would sound better. 3- In this case, I think the meaning you're trying to communicate is more similar to "purpose" than "meaning", as you're saying: Q)"what is life for (purpose of life)?" A)"To be healthy and happy." And "meaning" would be more like: "Which are the exact words to describe life?" |
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Yes, that is it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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