Dec. 9, 2020
Journal 22/09/20
As a leader, you can’t satisfy everyone, because they have different thoughts and desires, and these thoughts and desires are not necessarily both correct. Please don’t try to make everyone pleased. That is useless. You only need to follow these rules: open, fair and just. As to what they say about you or what they would do to you, please ignore these, otherwise you will feel very tired, so being a leader is not an easy thing. If you can’t feel joy from being a leader, not being a leader is not a bad thing.
Please don’t try to makplease everyone pleased.
This isn't necessarily incorrect but it sounds awkward. This is a more natural way to phrase it. I also wouldn't add Please at the beginning of the sentence just because there's a second please with a different meaning and it sounds a little weird too.
You only need to follow these rules: be open, fair and just.
As to what they say about you or what they would do to you, please ignore these, oit. Otherwise, you will feel very tired, so as being a leader is not an easy thing.
If you can’t feel joy from being a leader, choosing to not being a leader is non't a bad thing.
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Your english is really advanced! Nothing I corrected here would be misunderstood, I just added a more natural way to say things. :)
Dec. 9, 2020
Thank you for your corrections. Thank you very much.
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Journal 22/09/20 |
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As a leader, you can’t satisfy everyone, because they have different thoughts and desires, and these thoughts and desires are not necessarily both correct. |
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Please don’t try to make everyone pleased. Please don’t try to This isn't necessarily incorrect but it sounds awkward. This is a more natural way to phrase it. I also wouldn't add Please at the beginning of the sentence just because there's a second please with a different meaning and it sounds a little weird too. |
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That is useless. |
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You only need to follow these rules: open, fair and just. You only need to follow these rules: be open, fair and just. |
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As to what they say about you or what they would do to you, please ignore these, otherwise you will feel very tired, so being a leader is not an easy thing. As to what they say about you or what they would do to you, please ignore |
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If you can’t feel joy from being a leader, not being a leader is not a bad thing. If you can’t feel joy from being a leader, choosing to not being a leader is |
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