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Journal #22: "How I'm learning English"

I didn't write some journal beacause I was sick around two weeks and after that I felt bad myself. I mean I felt prostration. I start to write this journal again. I know I need this part of study. Why was I so lazy and non productivity? I think I had a bad time management and wrong daily schedule. I began to watch English YouTubers for practice my listening skill. One of new YouTubers was Dr. Andrew Huberman. Sometimes I don't understand what he told, because I have small vocabulary, but I find same videos in Russian and I can understand all of this what Dr. Andrew Huberman wanted to tell. In the begining I watched video about morning routine and I start to use this schadule today. It was interesting experience. I didn't do everything what he tell, but mostly I did. I felt myself better than past days. I want to follow this scgedule around thirty days and find out how this life style can help me.

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Journal #22: "How I'm learning English"


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I didn't write some journal beacause I was sick around two weeks and after that I felt bad myself.


I didhaven't write someten in my journal lately beacause I was sick for around two weeks, and after that I felt bad myself. I haven't written in my journal lately because I was sick for around two weeks, and after that I felt bad.

I didn't write someany entries in my journal beacause I was sick aroundfor almost two weeks and after that I felt bad about myself. I didn't write any entries in my journal because I was sick for almost two weeks and after that I felt bad about myself.

I didn't write some journalentries beacause I was sick for around two weeks and after that, I felt bad about myself. I didn't write some entries because I was sick for around two weeks and after that, I felt bad about myself.

The specific sections you write in a journal are also called 'journal entries'. You could also say "I didn't write in my journal for a while because I was sick..."

I mean I felt prostration.


I mean I felt prostrationexhausted. I mean I felt exhausted.

I mean I felt profrustrationed. I mean I felt frustrated.

I mean, I felt profrustration. I mean, I felt frustration.

I start to write this journal again.


ISo I've started to write thisin my journal again. So I've started to write in my journal again.

I have started to write this journal again. I have started to write again.

Avoiding repetitions is a sign of a advance language speaker

I started to write this journal again. I started to write this journal again.

It's past tense because you've already written the journal (like this one you just posted)

I know I need this part of study.


I know I need this part ofo include this in my studyies. I know I need to include this in my studies.

I know I need this as part of my study. I know I need this as part of my study.

Why was I so lazy and non productivity?


Why was I so lazy and non -productivitye? Why was I so lazy and non-productive?

Why was I so lazy and non -productivitye? Why was I so lazy and non-productive?

Why was I so lazy and unon productivitye? Why was I so lazy and unproductive?

I think I had a bad time management and wrong daily schedule.


I think I had a bad time management and wrong daily scheduleskills. I think I had bad time management skills.

I think I had a bad time management and a wrong daily schedule. I think I had bad time management and a wrong daily schedule.

Instead of 'wrong' using 'ineffective or inefficient' might be better

I began to watch English YouTubers for practice my listening skill.


I began to watch English YouTubers forto practice my listening skills. I began to watch English YouTubers to practice my listening skills.

I have also begaun to watch English YouTubers for practice my listening skill. I have also begun to watch English YouTubers for practice my listening skill.

You want to connect your previous sentences with the new sentence. So the flow is better.

I began to watch English YouTubers forto practice my listening skills. I began to watch English YouTubers to practice my listening skills.

One of new YouTubers was Dr. Andrew Huberman.


One of the new YouTubers I started to watch was Dr. Andrew Huberman. One of the new YouTubers I started to watch was Dr. Andrew Huberman.

One of newthe YouTubers was Dr. Andrew Huberman. One of the YouTuber was Dr. Andrew Huberman.

One of the new YouTubers was Dr. Andrew Huberman. One of the new YouTubers was Dr. Andrew Huberman.

Sometimes I don't understand what he told, because I have small vocabulary, but I find same videos in Russian and I can understand all of this what Dr. Andrew Huberman wanted to tell.


Sometimes I don't understand what he told,says because I have a small vocabulary, but I fiound same videos in Russian and I can understand all of this what Dr. Andrew Huberman wanted to tellsay. Sometimes I don't understand what he says because I have a small vocabulary, but I found same videos in Russian and I can understand all of what Dr. Andrew Huberman wanted to say.

Sometimes I don't understand what he toldsays, because I have a small vocabulary, but I find the same videos in Russian and I can understand all of ithis what Dr. Andrew Huberman wanted to tell. Sometimes I don't understand what he says, because I have a small vocabulary, but I find the same videos in Russian and I can understand all of it.

Avoid repetition

Sometimes I don't understand what he toldsays, because I have a small vocabulary, but I find the same videos in Russian and I can understand all of this what Dr. Andrew Huberman wanted to tellis saying. Sometimes I don't understand what he says, because I have a small vocabulary, but I find the same videos in Russian and I can understand all of what Dr. Andrew Huberman is saying.

In the begining I watched video about morning routine and I start to use this schadule today.


In the beginning, I watched a video about morning routines, and I started to use thise schaedule todayfrom the video. In the beginning, I watched a video about morning routines, and I started to use the schedule from the video.

In the beginingOne of the first videos I watched videowas about morning routine and I started to use this schaedule today. One of the first videos I watched was about morning routine and I started to use his schedule today.

In the beginning, I watched a video about morning routines and I started to use thisat schaedule today. In the beginning, I watched a video about morning routines and I started to use that schedule today.

It was interesting experience.


It was an interesting experience. It was an interesting experience.

It was an interesting experience. It was an interesting experience.

It was an interesting experience. It was an interesting experience.

I didn't do everything what he tell, but mostly I did.


I didn't do everything what he tell, but mostly I didhe said, but I did most of it. I didn't do everything he said, but I did most of it.

I didn't do everything what he tell, but mostly I didhe said, but I did most of it. I didn't do everything he said, but I did most of it.

I didn't do everything what he tell, but mostly I didhe said, but did most of it. I didn't do everything he said, but did most of it.

I felt myself better than past days.


I felt myself've been feeling better thane past few days. I've been feeling better the past few days.

I felt myself better than pastese days. I feel better these days.

I felt myself better than pastthe past few days. I felt better than the past few days.

I want to follow this scgedule around thirty days and find out how this life style can help me.


I want to follow this scghedule for around thirty days and find out howif this life style can help me. I want to follow this schedule for around thirty days and find out if this lifestyle can help me.

I want to follow this scghedule aroundfor thirty days and find out how this life style can help me. I want to follow this schedule for thirty days and find out how this lifestyle can help me.

I want to follow this scghedule for around thirty days and find out how this life style can help me. I want to follow this schedule for around thirty days and find out how this lifestyle can help me.

Thanks for reading my journals.


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